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12/06/2005 04:22:36 PM |
| the window's a bit bright, which directs my attention away from your subject. |
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12/04/2005 10:46:34 AM |
Good idea, but execution could be tuned.
Things to work on: The Window lighting is distracting. Change angle so that the window light comes from your back or from off to a side.
This would also eliminate the shadows from the flash, whcih make this a snapshot quality photo.
Try to use the rule of thirds in your photos. The subject, in this case the girl would have been stronger if she had been moved to the very left of the composition with books filling the rest of the frame. |
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12/04/2005 05:32:22 AM |
| The background is a little distracting. |
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12/03/2005 09:28:14 PM |
| This looks too much like a snapshot. The girl should at least have her eyes open |
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12/02/2005 05:46:46 PM |
| Yes there are a lot of books. Sorta looks like the subject is in a library rather than a book collector. The lights from the window is distracting. Perhaps a different angle would have been better. |
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11/30/2005 06:57:35 PM |
| like the softness with the open window |
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11/30/2005 02:31:21 PM |
| the window glare is very distracting, a tighter crop would help that, IMO. |
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11/30/2005 11:43:18 AM |
| The harsh glare from the windows are very distracting. |
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11/30/2005 02:47:57 AM |
| The bright light from the window really puts me off. The composition of the girl and the books is reall snapshottish, and uninspiring. |
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