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12/17/2005 10:49:40 PM |
** Greetings from the Critique Club **
'After the forbidden fruit'
I found this image to be very hard on the eyes, as much is out of focus, and that which is in focus is cluttered by it's surroundings. I really had to search the image to find the mathc with your title - just don't think it was strong enough. Perhaps if you had only the spoon with reflection in the image it would be better.
As for the desat - does not work for me here either.
Sorry I could not be more positive.
- Linda |
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12/11/2005 02:00:14 PM |
| I cant make heads or tails of this. |
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12/11/2005 02:48:19 AM |
| photo is too cluttered. viewer cant readily find point of focus. simplify composition next time. imho |
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12/08/2005 01:21:39 PM |
| I find this a bit busy and the foregroung being out of focus can't show what you are trying to achieve |
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12/06/2005 08:47:43 PM |
| This composition is a little to busy for me. The painting on the object to the far right seems to draw the most attention, but doesn't appear to be a main subject. I think simplifying this shot could bring out it's real message better. |
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12/05/2005 06:26:56 PM |
| too busy....don't know what the main subject is.... |
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12/05/2005 09:02:26 AM |
| A bit too busy I think. Maybe brighten a bit as well. |
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12/05/2005 07:50:33 AM |
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12/05/2005 07:49:11 AM |
| This is absolutly not working for me. Total chaos, I didn't see the bottle until after a while, the lightning is dull, and the frog-something in background is stealing all the attention. |
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12/05/2005 07:21:00 AM |
| This is very busy and confusing. I think I can see a bit of a fork on the left hand side, but my eyes keep going back to the frog (?) on the right, since that is the only thing with real focus. I don't quite understand what you were trying to do here. 4 |
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