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12/09/2005 01:32:08 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
The blue sky is very striking in this photo. I like the subject you are trying to capture. There are just a few things I think would improve this photo - 1) whenever you think you have your composition, take two steps forward and see if it doesn't get better. I think it would in this case. 2) The focus is off - it's a bright sunny day and I don't understand why the focus is so off. If you use photoshop, you can also sharpen the final image - which would work a bit here.
happy shooting!
Matt |
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12/06/2005 11:22:46 AM |
| This is nice, but if it were in sharp focus it would be a lot nicer. Tighter zoom/crop might help also. I love the deep blue sky. |
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12/03/2005 02:00:33 PM |
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12/02/2005 06:16:10 AM |
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12/01/2005 02:45:49 PM |
| Looks a little out of focus? |
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12/01/2005 03:50:53 AM |
| This too simplistic and understated. I think it would have been better closer to your subject, or even panned right a bit, the building over there seem more interesting than to the left. Also your horizion is tilted enough to feel uncomfortable. |
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11/30/2005 03:06:24 PM |
| The picture is a bit blurry, it seems as if you took this picture from a moving car. |
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