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12/09/2005 02:59:42 PM |
**Critique Club**
Wow what a great image- I love it!
The color is superb as well as the lighting. The contrast seems perfect- you can see all the holes and even some nicks quite clearly.
The composition is wonderful- the title says it all and you do a great job at mimicking the sunset.
The only thing that̢۪s killing this image you probably already know. The focus! It̢۪s not just a small depth of field; there is no focal point to speak of. It̢۪s hard with low lit situations but maybe going to a manual focus will help.
I can̢۪t wait to see what other great ideas you come up with, very creative of you. Good luck with your future challenges!
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12/06/2005 09:45:50 AM |
| I like the message in this!! Industrial sunsets will replace the natural ones!! O.o Eeep. The only thing I'd say is it does look a tad blurry. |
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12/05/2005 04:07:38 PM |
| What am I looking at? Is it industrial or something out of the kitchen? |
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12/02/2005 10:03:04 AM |
| Interesting, but the entire focus seems off. |
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12/02/2005 08:28:29 AM |
| Love the abstraction, industrial washing machine landscape |
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11/30/2005 10:14:26 PM |
| metallic sunset is a clever macro shot |
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11/29/2005 08:59:01 PM |
| Washing machine? Nice red and orange tones but overall the shot just isn't working for me. I might suggest trying a different perspective next time. Maybe a more symmetrical approach. |
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