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09/19/2006 09:22:10 AM |
| I think of this as an homage to Diane Arbus's famous photo of twins. Here, there is a more conscious effort to bring out the dark side (the severe expressions and the distortion of their bodies through foreshortening), which actually makes it more fun than the original (of course, Arbus was not trying to have fun!). I love this. |
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12/01/2005 09:31:21 AM |
B&W !!! Where is the b&w of this one?!
I think this one should have been scored higher!
They are charming.
And it took me a second to noticed that they are not the same :-)
A real keeper!
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11/29/2005 05:43:21 PM |
| Great expressions. Nice color. The aluminum rail in the background is distracting. And the girl on the left(models left, viewers right) has something distracting on the inside of her left sleeve. |
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11/29/2005 02:24:59 AM |
| nice portrait photo of two girls |
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11/28/2005 04:27:04 PM |
| i like this one because the colors stand out to me, great job |
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11/28/2005 05:51:19 AM |
| The girls are beautiful.. your gonna have your hands ful. However.. im not sure i understand your title. |
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11/28/2005 04:46:34 AM |
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11/27/2005 03:16:15 PM |
| Are they indentical twins? If so, why don't their shoes match? I think this would have been great if they were sitting alike, hair alike, shoes alike, with same look on both faces! |
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11/26/2005 02:40:54 AM |
| Geneticly and chronologicly even, good original approach. Well photographed too. |
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11/25/2005 07:49:17 PM |
| very minor (no pun intended this time) thing, wish the shoes had been at least the same color, nice photo overall |
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11/24/2005 08:43:31 AM |
| great models for this challenge. lack of symmetry in their poses detract a bit for me. |
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11/23/2005 08:35:38 PM |
| photogenic twins i would say! |
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11/23/2005 05:11:20 PM |
| IMO a snapshot of two very pretty girls - with a large south facing window and some posing these two could bring you a ribbon |
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11/23/2005 11:27:09 AM |
Look pretty even to me. Nice portrait. Only issue would be non-matching shoes, but you can't have everything.
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11/23/2005 07:52:55 AM |
This is a very well done snap-shot type photo. Exposure and focus are dead on. There are a few details that could have made it something better.
Shadows (particularly the deep shadow behind the legs) are distracting. It appears you used fill flash effectively, but you've left those shadows. A pcoket bounce may have lightened those shadows for you.
Perhaps the most annoying detail for me is the top "border" where the brick ends. My eyee is drawn to it.
I'd like to see the subjects more posed. A symetrical composition with them in very similar positions would have made a strong entry for this composition. With that, having black shoes vs. white shoes throws off the balance. |
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11/23/2005 05:12:12 AM |
| Two/too cute, Two great expressions |
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11/23/2005 04:37:25 AM |
| Beautiful girls. I'd love to see more formal portraiture of them. This doesn't do them justice. WOW - their skin is gorgeous. |
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