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06/24/2003 12:47:21 AM |
| Very nice shot, but the wrinkles in the backdrop show a little to clearly... I think a shallow dof, blurring out the backdrop, would have added alot to this shot. |
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06/23/2003 05:33:14 PM |
| I like this very much, i like the flower, make's a nice touch. 10 |
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06/23/2003 02:40:16 PM |
| A beautiful, classic portrait. |
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06/23/2003 12:44:00 AM |
| This is a pretty good portrait in terms of the subject. The background is too wrinkly which is easily solved... move away from it so it isn't immediately behind you. The shadow at the bottom is pretty distracting too. |
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06/20/2003 08:33:37 PM |
| An overall very nicely taken classic style of self portrait. The wrinkle in the sheet and the different shadings of greys in it near the bottom, seem to detract from the photo though as they take my attention away from you. |
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06/19/2003 05:20:31 PM |
| a lovely image of a lovely lovely woman. Who is lucky to have her gracing their world???? |
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06/19/2003 08:40:39 AM |
| Comments: you look uncomfortable in this pic, which is a minus. Wistful would work, or happy, better. Would like the rose to be more prominent -- looks like it's an afterthought in this pic. Like the backdrop very much (looks like steps or something), as well as the lighting. The composition also works, because of where your gaze is directed. |
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06/19/2003 04:10:37 AM |
| I'm no expert, but I personally would have liked a little more light on you. The backdrop seems brighter than the subject. I like that you are a tad off-center in the framing. |
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06/18/2003 08:24:50 AM |
| Nice soft focus on this shot. |
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06/18/2003 07:46:11 AM |
| great lighting. well done. |
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06/18/2003 06:58:55 AM |
| I think a portrait should reveal some character of the model. Did your picture accomplish that? Yes! Good job. |
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06/18/2003 12:11:02 AM |
| I don't know where you come from, but this picture somehow makes you look extremely American.. Very odd. Anyway, not a bad portrait, but the lighting is a bit erratic and the focus / sharpness could do with some improbement. You have quite a noticable face - perhaps for the next session of portraits zoom in a lot closer and get some eye contact with the camera? (6) |
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