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Pearly Whites
Pearly Whites
Jaimeson


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Light On White II (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Konica Minolta DiMAGE Z5
Location: Durham, NC
Date: Oct 25, 2005
Aperture: 3.2
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/4
Galleries: Abstract, Macro
Date Uploaded: Oct 25, 2005

Toothpaste on paper.

Edits: Crop, Brightness/Contrast, Desaturation, Curves.

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Place: 207 out of 277
Avg (all users): 4.4042
Avg (commenters): 4.8333
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Views since voting: 941
Views during voting: 400
Votes: 287
Comments: 7
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11/04/2005 04:13:04 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club.

White on white definately a tough challenge to avoid the over exposured areas which cause your subject to blend in with the background and that is what happened with two of the three drops here.

This appears to be slightly out of focus and just needs a little less softness to it.

Your composition is good and your use of thirds is well excuted. As for meeting the challenge. Yes without any question you met it.

Anna
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/01/2005 09:14:39 AM
did you try this without the soft focus? I would have love to see more clearly those reflections off the top of each droplet.
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10/31/2005 05:35:32 PM
Composition is good and the idea is good, but this would have been more effective had the focus been better.
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10/28/2005 01:32:32 AM
The contrast is a bit high on this one, a little too grainy.
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10/27/2005 11:15:12 AM
My idea was mayonaise on white bread, this is pretty close.
You still have all the detail, very subtile but good job.
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10/26/2005 07:11:26 PM
Interesting pictue. Love the trail on the one in front right. Its seems a bit soft or out of focus which makes it almost melt into the background. The frame makes it work though. Good job!
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10/26/2005 04:34:28 PM
Like this! But would prefer just a bit more USM
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