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10/06/2003 01:41:16 AM |
| Nice face expression, you just needed to be more in focus. Go on like this. Alex |
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06/24/2003 10:30:09 AM |
your shot looks a little soft, maybe more contrast would help and how about a little blue tint ?
Good facial expression. |
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06/23/2003 06:54:46 PM |
A little out of focus. Looks too snap-shotty. Heavy shadows falling across the eyes.
You're a cutie! |
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06/21/2003 06:14:40 PM |
| Little out of focus...thanks |
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06/21/2003 03:08:08 PM |
| This looks like the photo from your profile. I like your expression here, and the simple sample of suroundings as background. |
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06/20/2003 04:50:22 PM |
| A bit blurry, and I don't know what the stuff on the left adds. Maybe crop to just your face? |
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06/20/2003 10:21:42 AM |
| this photo is a kinda fuzzy, it could have been in better focus. I like that you're off center, it gives it a different feeling, but it's a little too much, I would have cropped a little off the left side. Good job though |
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06/20/2003 04:04:57 AM |
| This picture makes it look as if you identify strongly with those bottles on your dresser.. Unless that was intentional, i think the picture was a bit of a miss, I am afraid. (3) |
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06/20/2003 03:20:19 AM |
| I see spot cream, hair gel, shampoo and conditioner there. This photo says more about you than you think it does. Unless you meant to indicate your teenage obsessions. |
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06/20/2003 02:03:05 AM |
Focus seems off.
Strong composition (for me, I like the inclusion of the environment and how that's been composed in).
Lighting a little harsh though works OK in this image. |
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06/19/2003 08:36:48 PM |
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06/19/2003 12:12:38 PM |
| Hi there, this is David (Levin), right? I like how your face is to one side of the photo. I think the pict might be better if you hadn't cropped off your one ear. Also, you need to focus more on the eyes, and, if possible, make them more prominent - you have beautiful eyes, but they're not showing enough. Another thing is that the background, even though blurry, competes for attention with your face. ~6 |
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06/19/2003 07:20:31 AM |
Just cutting off a bit of your ear doesn't work well. You need a little more room on that side. The bg clutter is distracting.
Your expression is good. |
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06/19/2003 03:12:10 AM |
| Focus is a little too soft |
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06/18/2003 12:54:56 PM |
| I like this - has a documentary feel and gives the sense that there is a story to be told. Well done -9 |
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06/18/2003 10:22:05 AM |
Yo,
Interesting choice in background. I might have focused more on your face and used a smaller DoF, so the background was even more out of focus. Nice use of the rule of thirds. |
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06/18/2003 08:17:08 AM |
| Not bad. I would have voted higher if it was a bit sharper. Also the background dresser is a bit distracting. I find myself trying to figure out whats on it. |
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06/18/2003 07:39:54 AM |
| great lighting. well done. ps clean your room. |
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06/17/2003 09:45:20 PM |
| I recognize you! Keep working it My young Friend:) Something more of interest in the backround would have been great. |
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