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11/04/2005 05:55:28 AM |
*Critique Club*
First of all... does it meet the challenge? Yes... you have grain... I feel that maybe there is a bit too much here... but I actually kind of like it (which is unusual for me). Good choice to put this in black and white, or it wouldn't have worked with the grain.
On to specifics...
Great composition... my eyes go right to where they are supposed to and nice use of empty space as well, The darkness of the duck really draws you to that right corner, which is a good thing. And that mallard, leads you to the other duck, who by having his head turned and not looking off the frame manages to keep you in the image.
I agree with metatate I feel there is something funny about to happen... in a sort of Charlie Chaplin way. The pond is just too calm... and that mallard looks ready to end the duck's peaceful sleep :-D.
I like the fact that you didn't go for extreme contrast here... it's all slightly greyish and I think it works... I think this is really a picture that at first looks a bit dull, but as you look at it, it draws you in more, which is a good thing. Did you get more frames? Did anything funny happen next?
Nicely done.
-Talya |
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10/29/2005 07:38:45 AM |
| nice shot. it gives me a sensation of cold |
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10/29/2005 04:37:42 AM |
| nice capture. looks like something funny about to happen. 7 |
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10/28/2005 07:38:50 PM |
| Bumping up after second look. Nice, simple composition and as I interpret the challenge you do have image grain. Had there been a bit more overall contrast, I would have scored it higher. |
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10/25/2005 07:15:01 AM |
| this photo is ripe for interpretation...and i dig that. |
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10/24/2005 01:20:00 PM |
| Great melancholy subject for a grainy picture. You also weren't chicken with the grain, and I'm saving my top scores for those. 9 |
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10/24/2005 09:06:02 AM |
| I think this photograph is awesome! You did an excellent job catching this moment on your camera. Good luck! |
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