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11/02/2005 07:48:59 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Hello and just what city is this? I have no clue as I'm not familier with most city skylines, LOL! :)
This has the potential to be a wonderful great shot. The idea is there, the composition is there but the post processing really hurt this one in the end. The halos around the building, the tilt on the horizon and the uneven colors really hurt this shot. Also, while you used the 640 on one side the other side is so short you lose the chance to really make this shot work.
The bridge coming out on the right hand side is not needed IMHO, if you cropped it tighter on that side and then straightened it out and don't sharpen so much it leaves a halo, add a noise filter if you need to. If you rework this I would love to see it!
Good Luck in Future Challenges!
Deannda |
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10/30/2005 06:32:44 PM |
| Halo next to the buildings...Tilted horizon...Too many distractions too..too bad :( |
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10/30/2005 04:49:44 PM |
| A little overworked for my taste |
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10/30/2005 03:31:54 AM |
| The color are not quite rihgt and a bit over saturated. Ther are halos around some of the biuldins that is a bit distracting. Composition is good |
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10/28/2005 07:17:21 PM |
| Not bad, and with a few adjustments I think this could be better. It seems to be tilting to the left and I wonder if rotating the horizon a bit clockwise would help? Also, and this is just me personally, I find that black and white or sepia photos with grain have greater impact than color photos. |
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10/28/2005 07:02:26 PM |
| This is a nice photo. And it leaves me wondering whether or not the grain really enhanced the image. To me, grain works best in photos that are dark, contrasty or moody, or to provide an "aged" look. This seems to me like a good image that had grain added to it for a contest, rather than an image that was enhanced by the use of grain. Keep shooting! :) |
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10/25/2005 04:56:25 AM |
| Interesting picture. the colors seem off a bit. |
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10/23/2005 09:49:16 PM |
| slightly too much processing IMO, not a fan of halo's |
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