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10/31/2005 03:03:54 PM |
*Critique Club*
Hi... I hope my critique is helpful!!
First of all, I like what you were trying to go for here, however I feel the the reflection just didn't come out as strongly as it needed to for the challenge.
Compositionally I find it a bit lacking, there is just too much unneeded extra space, which I really don't see a point to having (unlike say where you purposely have blank space in an image) I feel you could have filled the space more appropriately... maybe even including the candles in your image? I find myself drawn to the very center of the image, and then I lose interest in it, it's not compelling me to explore the photo as a whole.
I like the focus on the word "automatic" but I'm trying to decide whether it could have been just a tad sharper or not (sorry I'm in college, and I've been doing a LOT of work).
I really like the colors that are in the image.
Overall I think you might have benefitted by taking a different look at different angles here, seeing this toaster from different ways, and trying different crops and compositions. |
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10/25/2005 01:42:12 PM |
| a nice, softly lit photo. like the negative space and the composition. |
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10/25/2005 10:45:23 AM |
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10/24/2005 01:52:44 PM |
Too dark for me...
Th reflection is also minor imho. |
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10/20/2005 07:48:45 PM |
| INteresting picture. nice candle reflections |
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10/19/2005 02:58:03 AM |
| I like the colors in this one, but it lacks *something* to keep the interest. |
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10/18/2005 09:27:25 PM |
| crisp with nice colors. where is the reflection? 8 |
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