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06/22/2003 11:33:09 AM |
FROM THE CRITIQUE CLUB
This is a nice, simple shot. Black and white seems like a good choice, although it might add interest to have the image in colour. The picture is nicely in focus. Light is OK, but not great - the glare on the front right corner of the stapler in particular is distracting. I think a bit more contrast would be nice. The simple white mat (border) is a good choice here.
It is hard to know what to say about this image. It is a fine shot, but it's not an exciting picture, and IMHO few people will spend much time looking at it or coming back to it. Anyway - keep shooting!
Ursula (uabresch) |
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06/15/2003 06:32:18 PM |
Nice composition adds depth to the subject. Black and white gives attention to its form, which seems appropriate here. I find your lighting less interesting than your other elements, but this is a straightforward "stock" photo of a stapler. |
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06/14/2003 02:52:22 AM |
wow, this is cool. I like the use of shallow dof on this one. I like how it blurs toward the back of the shot. effective use of black and white! |
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06/13/2003 01:29:38 PM |
Might make an interesting catalog photo. I question the choice of black and white but I'm just like that... still, as your subject is itself not something most people are going to spend a long time looking at, having it be bright and colourful might help. |
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06/11/2003 05:54:08 PM |
Simple shot, good composition. |
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06/10/2003 07:04:36 PM |
Nice composition, grayscale works well with this shot, well titled! Good job! |
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06/10/2003 05:02:47 PM |
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06/09/2003 03:33:43 PM |
Very sharp photo. A little glare, but otherwise good lighting. Good angle for subject. Not as much art as office supply, very low "WOW" factor. 7 Rob the Swash |
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06/09/2003 08:59:08 AM |
Nice shot, nice DOF, black and white was a nice choice. Good luck with it. |
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06/09/2003 06:23:33 AM |
Classic Swingline. :)
The light is weak but the composition is okay. Good luck. |
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