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06/22/2003 04:35:23 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Looks like a Savin
Composition - Nice and colorful. I think there are a few dead spots though where there are no buttons. I was thinking maybe taking this from the number side would've worked out a little better. What do I know though? You do have a better array of colors from this end, and they are brighter.
Technical - With only a very small area of this actually in focus, and part of that area not having anything there, it might've given the illusion that more of it was in focus if some of the number buttons were in focus. Good use of shallow DOF, but maybe just a little too shallow. I think at f5.6 or so you could've put the whole green button in focus, considering you had the light to do this, and/or a tripod because handholding at 1/30 sec or 1/15 sec is definitely tough to pull off.
Overall - For what it is, I think you pulled off a pretty good pic. A little greater DOF to show more of the "start" button in focus I think is the only thing that would've made much of a difference to this pic. Nice work. Good luck in future challenges - Bob |
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06/15/2003 06:04:27 PM |
| Vivid colors, great depth of field, a message, what more is needed! I especially like the 'on' light. |
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06/14/2003 04:31:59 PM |
| DOF could have been a little deeper IMO. Great use of colours though. |
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06/12/2003 08:08:57 PM |
nice macro, good composition, IMO...
JB |
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06/11/2003 09:25:28 AM |
| Interesting use of DoF, but you cut off the bottom of the button. |
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06/10/2003 09:39:15 PM |
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06/10/2003 07:13:13 PM |
| Captures the modern office. Colors are well done. |
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06/09/2003 09:37:22 AM |
| Ahhh, fax machine face. Lets see...I know this seems a little nit picky but I would have liked to see the green button more in the bottom corner and could have gotten just a little more blue at the top. I like your use of DOF. I really like the colors. They are vivid. 8 Good luck in the challenge. |
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06/09/2003 08:39:08 AM |
| The colours are nice, the DOF is nicely done too. |
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06/08/2003 10:55:04 PM |
| DOF is too shallow for my liking. |
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