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10/10/2005 06:22:44 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club Garret.
I like the simplicity and the geometry of this photo, but I think it might be a little too simple. A straight up building, solid black sky, plain block lettersâ€Â¦ There is nothing that really jumps out and says wow. Maybe try it right after sunset with some interesting clouds? Or try a more interesting/unusual angle?
I do like the way the lighted parts frame the building, but did you know if dropped the aperture down to about 4 you’d get some starburst from them and that might give the photo a little wow factor? |
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09/28/2005 07:27:23 AM |
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09/28/2005 06:25:38 AM |
| Where is ground level in the photo? |
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