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10/10/2005 06:06:13 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club Shannon.
The first thing I notice when I look at your image is that great blue sky. The second thing I notice is the dull, drab concrete wall. If I were taking this, the guy would be on the bottom left of the photo and I̢۪d take it from a few steps to your left. This gives the guy a little angle so you get more of a side view of his face looking out, gives you a lot more of that great blue sky and makes it fit the rule of thirds. It makes the image more about the sky, and oh yeah there is a guy singing in the corner. Maybe? Straight on and centered usually is not going to be the best option. A touch of neat image to clean the noise in the sky would help too.
It̢۪s still a good image as is, and looking at your other submissions I think you have a real good eye. I expect to see some real great stuff from you in the future!
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10/03/2005 02:52:57 PM |
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10/03/2005 02:48:41 PM |
| I like the ones that tell a story :) 9 |
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10/02/2005 01:18:07 PM |
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09/30/2005 06:08:39 AM |
| Fun and well presented. Maybe a tad blurry. |
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09/29/2005 06:23:15 PM |
| For me, there is a bit too much of the wall. Such a great sky, had there been an even steeper angle from beneath the guitarist I would have scored it higher. |
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09/29/2005 05:06:35 PM |
i think i saw this posted in a forum already... either way, its pretty good. 6
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09/29/2005 09:20:23 AM |
| Nice vision for this challenge. I like the blue sky backdrop. The image would have been more powerful for me if the guitar case was not there. But I don't know if you had any control over this. |
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09/28/2005 12:48:57 PM |
| would have cropped off bottom third of picture, and made black and white. |
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09/28/2005 07:52:43 AM |
| I really get the "looking up" feeling from the ground. Additionally, the "non-pose" expression is great on the subject. Nice Pic. |
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