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09/26/2005 05:05:51 AM |
IMHO you have too much contrast here. I'd like to see more detail in the man's face. The suff in the wagon and the details in the fence are blown away. |
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09/24/2005 07:12:38 AM |
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09/23/2005 02:40:46 PM |
I think I see what you're going for here, with the subject squarely on the right third line. However, there's too much other stuff in the picture to really keep one's eyes directly on that spot. I'm also not sure I like the saturation/color washing that you did. As a whole I think that technique is overused, and really needs to add something to the picture to make it effective. That doesn't happen for me here.
The subject itself could have made an interesting study, if he was willing to cooperate. |
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09/23/2005 01:18:03 PM |
For me there is way too much ilght on the back fence, and is too busy. |
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09/23/2005 05:56:00 AM |
meets challenge, seems a little blownout imo, like the idea |
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09/22/2005 10:34:46 AM |
Overexposed, harsh, poor lighting, poor image quality. |
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09/22/2005 03:46:32 AM |
Demonstrates rule of thirds beautifully, but this image is so colour processed that the interest is taken away from the subject. |
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09/21/2005 08:56:57 PM |
not really pleasing to look at. maybe too much contrast |
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09/21/2005 06:14:53 PM |
the effects aren't pleasing to the eye, need face to be more visible |
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09/21/2005 04:20:09 PM |
Fits challenge=4
Color/lighting=1
DOF/focus=1
Wow factor/uniqueness=0
Attractiveness=0
I'm not a huge fan of high key images but I think you did a good job at it, seems a little centered but not too badly.
Good luck |
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09/21/2005 11:26:15 AM |
Great use of desat here. The red really pops out on the three items - the bricks, the hat/face and the bundle of things in his carrier. I love the urban sense of it. Striking and it has great contrast. |
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09/21/2005 07:56:55 AM |
Nice placement of subject in the line of thirds on the right of the frame. Head/body are about at the intersection of the upper/right lines. Not sure what the man is doing, interesting image though. |
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09/21/2005 04:19:15 AM |
too contrasty for my taste, it causes too much loss of detail |
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