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09/25/2005 09:10:11 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Gee, BeeGee, I'm beginning to feel as if I know you. Greetings again.
These models are shown engaging in a delightful conspiracy and that's a pleasure to see after all the 'downers' elsewhere. (But maybe that was a factor in the scoring.) I like the lighting; it seems to add to the 'conspiracy' factor. However, and I know you couldn't help this, I think there's some distraction and busy-ness in the straps and clothing in the bottom of the picture. If these models had been dressed in black, for example, it would have set off the center of attention, the interaction of the faces, perfectly.
All I can say, is keep up the good work, and to heck with the scoring. |
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09/22/2005 06:03:01 PM |
| I think this shot would be much better if you were to capture the face of the girl on the left, and shift your angle down to eye level. 4 |
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09/22/2005 03:43:18 AM |
| plus 3 points if they were kissing. just kidding. nice composition. |
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09/21/2005 11:19:09 AM |
| Always makes you wonder what we whisper about!! Good shot -- good composition and idea. |
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09/19/2005 12:43:50 PM |
| pose could be much better to maintain the "idea" but provide better detail on the subjects. no eyes == slightly boring unless artistically implied |
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09/18/2005 05:57:16 PM |
| Very nice image. The girls are adorable and it's a classic moment. |
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09/18/2005 01:13:52 PM |
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09/18/2005 11:48:30 AM |
| I knew your gender was up to something! |
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09/18/2005 02:29:34 AM |
| This is a cute shot, but I'd like to see just a little bit more contrast. I'm also not too crazy about the downward angle of view, I think more of a straight on would have been more effective.. |
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09/18/2005 01:42:18 AM |
| Hehehehehe.....secret girl talk. Well captured...but I am surprised that let you so close to their secrets...or did you use a good zoom? |
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09/17/2005 08:38:01 PM |
| I like the title and take on the challenge. |
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