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06/16/2002 08:05:00 AM |
| This looks like a train to me. No road is visible. |
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06/15/2002 10:17:00 PM |
| Interesting... lots of metallic texturing and structure to look at. One of those things you don't look at that way until someone takes a photo and forces you to stop and examine it for a while. |
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06/13/2002 08:50:00 AM |
| Maybe I just have a fascination with the number 2, but I like this shot. I like the way it's cropped and the people sitting in the window make it. It's really a good subject..the lines..the metallic color, even the reflection in the glass. It's just cool. |
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06/13/2002 06:07:00 AM |
| cool. a little fuzzy. some barrel distortion apparent UR. horizon also a bit sloped, gives a sloppy feel. |
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06/12/2002 05:20:00 PM |
| The number 2 with two visible passengers... Very nice coincidence! I like the expression on the matron's face in the window. She looks so fleshy and human against the steely rail car. |
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06/12/2002 05:09:00 PM |
| Metallic bus? We call 'em trains here. |
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06/12/2002 08:22:00 AM |
| Good idea. It feels as if the people in the window should be the focal point for my attention, but the 2 keeps drawing my eyes away, it also doesn't help that the girl is cut off. Your horizon also isn't quite level (parallel lines in bottom right). |
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06/10/2002 09:14:00 PM |
| thsi composition is lacking, the faces should not be cut off. At least is it showing some creative thinking. |
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06/10/2002 08:30:00 PM |
| creativety 3 interesting 2 focus 5 framing 4 = 4 |
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06/10/2002 04:53:00 PM |
| Since your picture shows a big number 2 that is what I gave you :) |
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06/10/2002 01:40:00 PM |
| bus or a train? Cool what ever it is. |
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06/10/2002 01:36:00 PM |
| Hmm.. Maybe black and white, and without the 2/people -- kinda distracting.. That lady sure is happy tho! |
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06/10/2002 12:46:00 PM |
| A subway/train is a bit of a strectch for me as being 'on the road' but I will not try to argue that particular point with this photo... As for the composition and framing of this shot, I think I would like to see more of the passengers through the window. The number 2 on the train is definitely pulling my attention away from the possible better subjects in the photo. This shot could have potentially produced more impact if I was looking down the edge of the train towards one end of it.... It should have also reduced the amount of light glare that is boucing back towards the camera from the upper left portion of the frame... |
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06/10/2002 11:16:00 AM |
| Doesn't say anything. Not sharp |
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06/10/2002 08:58:00 AM |
| I think the fact that the lines are not parallel/perpendicular to the edges of the frame is detrimental. Otherwise, interesting patterns. |
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