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Ah, yes, the Quonset Hut. A utilitarian innovation during World War II that has stuck with us ever since. (Of course spelling shouldn't count, but let's don't give the voting perfectionists a chance: put your best guess into Google, and they'll usually help you with the rest.)
Sure, this does a fairly good job at showing perspective but basically it is a pattern shot, and unless a pattern shot is very, very interesting, it probably won't keep the attention of a viewer. Was there a corner of the hut that could have been included to give the image some depth? Or could you have tossed a pebble, or flower on the roof to break up the monotony of the gray? All these things are possibilities and suggestions to get you thinking.
Technically, it's a good photograph. And it fits the Challenge.
When your images get to be a bit more exciting, I think you'll go far at DPC. I'll look forward to seeing more of your work. |
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