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04/03/2007 08:58:52 AM |
Originally posted by M.O.C.:
Should've been named boobjana. pretty subject but the attention is drawn to the lower half. 7 |
The comment regarding where the attention is drawn is fine, but your first comment is the type that would land many a man flat on the ground with a sore jaw, and probably sitting there saying "What did I do?". Shame on you. |
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09/16/2005 09:36:23 AM |
| Should've been named boobjana. pretty subject but the attention is drawn to the lower half. 7 |
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09/15/2005 03:34:13 AM |
| the horizon seems to cut through her head. :( |
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09/14/2005 07:14:23 PM |
| very flat picture, may be cause because of use of on-camera flash |
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09/14/2005 03:21:58 AM |
| This looks a little too sharp for the background. Did you sharpen it at all? Or is it lighting? Something looks a little unatural somewhere... |
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09/13/2005 10:42:52 PM |
| I feel this photo could be great, but the angle is causing her chest to become the focal point along with what appears to be the indention of her bra instead of her beautiful eyes. I feel that if you had turned her body in more toward the camera it would have took away the too harsh outline of the white against the dark water and at the same time would have erased some of the lines that are running across her neck. This is a lovely model and a great background. The exposure was done very well. |
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09/13/2005 07:33:26 PM |
| I like the photo, but for me, the thick black border is too much and detracts from the overall pleasantness of the photo. |
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09/13/2005 04:40:35 PM |
| nice picture...color is good, 10 |
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09/13/2005 12:06:46 PM |
| Very pretty model, and nice lighting on her. I feel the background is more distracting, esp. so because of the border. A close crop on this same picture on her face would be a lot more interesting photographically. |
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09/13/2005 08:26:26 AM |
| pretty scene - your crop makes it look like you meant to emohasize her bust, it competes with her face. which is nicely captured, the slight breeze on her hair is great |
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09/13/2005 08:02:17 AM |
| what's the main attraction here? |
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09/12/2005 07:10:31 PM |
| too posed for my liking, the model and background is gorgeous though 6 |
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09/12/2005 06:03:19 PM |
| Wow! Nice model... too much fill flash, but has good exposure... |
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09/12/2005 03:58:40 PM |
| very nice, just gorgeous deserves at least top 5 |
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09/12/2005 11:18:11 AM |
| there are so many distractions in this photo. I think the whole right side could go. The framing is too much. I think this would have been more effective if you got in closer to her eyes as they seem mysterious. |
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09/12/2005 05:13:46 AM |
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09/11/2005 10:00:24 PM |
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09/11/2005 09:12:08 PM |
| first thing I noticed was that her breasts look like they are setting on the frame of the pic. I think the cropping should be either higher or lower..and the lighting of the woman seems different than the background. It makes the background look like a poster. |
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