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09/21/2005 07:21:02 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!!
Nice portrait! The first thing I notice is the angle, it portrays such a feeling of fun, as does the expression on her face. Her eyes are beautiful, and maybe could have been accentuated more. With her blonde hair and fair skin, perhaps a darker color blouse or background might make this portrait a little more interesting and add a little more depth. The focus seems a bit off, her right eye seems sharper and brighter than the left. Very well composed, everything seems to work together to give the viewer a sense of fun. Overall, a great portrait of a pretty, happy girl! Good work and keep shooting!!
~~SiSi |
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09/15/2005 04:11:58 AM |
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09/14/2005 01:39:02 AM |
| This is a cute girl with a cute pose. Would like to have seen a bit more light in her left eye. Maybe slightly out of focus. |
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09/13/2005 07:01:34 PM |
| Good angle, it almost looks like a tear in her eye. |
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09/13/2005 10:58:19 AM |
| Perhaps a little brighter colored blouse? |
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09/13/2005 10:24:43 AM |
| Nice shot. Great pose too, I just wish there was more light around her mouth, the darkness being in that spot kind of distracts. 7 |
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09/13/2005 08:46:36 AM |
| great subject, just needs work on lighting and sharpness some |
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09/13/2005 02:24:26 AM |
| A genuine smile and a familiar face, beautiful.. |
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09/12/2005 05:07:40 PM |
| A nice, natural model - pretty smile, and I like the contrasting thin, black border. |
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09/12/2005 02:40:52 PM |
| Falleg stelpa og flott mynd. Finnst samt seinni vinnslan betri. |
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09/12/2005 10:33:31 AM |
| Beautiful!!!! Perfect composition, and what a natural she is in front of the camera! There's such freshness and innocence in that face! |
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09/12/2005 07:35:13 AM |
| Good composition. Natural expression. Had you use some fill light to tame down the shadows on her face (mostly the nose), you would have had a much better result. |
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09/12/2005 06:54:20 AM |
| This is nice but I would call this a candid rather than a portrait. The shadows on the mouth and nose is a bit distracting. She has a beautiful smile and eyes! |
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09/12/2005 06:54:09 AM |
| Love the eyes, expression and hair. Good Picture. The Blue sky in the back compliment her eyes well. |
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