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09/18/2005 07:54:55 PM |
| A good capture of a lovely subject. Bumping to 7 |
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09/16/2005 01:41:56 PM |
| a bounce card to fill in the shadows around her eyes would make this very cool - love the textures and expression - great photo |
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09/15/2005 07:29:12 AM |
| Beautiful shot. The light is a bit harsh on her left and the background is somewhat distracting. Nice capture of her expression. |
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09/14/2005 07:06:42 PM |
| the eyes are in shadow. Not a good thing for portrait IMO... |
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09/14/2005 03:20:52 PM |
| the contrast is off or something. It seems dark yet light at the same time. Nice looking model. I'll bet you could get plenty of good shots with her. |
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09/14/2005 10:12:18 AM |
| alot of burning going along her forehead, nose, shoulder and blouse. nice contrast in the wood background. needs a bit more softer light in her eyes. 5/10 |
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09/14/2005 05:48:12 AM |
| This is a terrific candid portrait. The simple composition and unpretentious, casual feel makes it a very fine and real-life image. As a result, Janelle is a participant in the portrait, and not just a pretty prop. 8 |
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09/13/2005 11:24:45 PM |
| The focus seems a bit too soft on the face, sharper on the background. A reflector would a have put some lights in her eyes, making the photo come more alive. i also feel that she is looking a bit too far to the side with her body too straight to make this seem natural instead of stiff and posed. |
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09/13/2005 10:18:58 AM |
| Very nice. I woulda liked it a bit better if her eyes had a little more light, but I still think it's above average for this challenge. |
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09/13/2005 05:58:53 AM |
| Too much distracting background. |
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09/12/2005 06:10:45 PM |
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09/12/2005 04:25:38 PM |
| This appears to be more of a candid or snapshot than a portrait, IMHO. |
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09/12/2005 04:11:18 PM |
| For me, it seems a bit grainy around her face, but I like the composition and natural background. |
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09/12/2005 10:37:02 AM |
| some thing has caused this to look somewhat flat, side lighting or to white boards, not sure. |
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09/12/2005 06:23:39 AM |
| Lighting is a bit harsh, could perhaps do away with some background on the left to make a tighter composition? |
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09/11/2005 09:15:57 PM |
| Good, good. Love the color coordination you used here. Very pretty. I am a little bit noisy up front though. |
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09/11/2005 09:04:28 PM |
| A great pose, model and background. Focus a little off on face especially around the eyes. If you could get a little more color in the blown out areas along her nose and forehead it would be a great photos. |
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