Greetings from the Critique Club
by strangeghost
COMPOSITION
My initial feeling is that, while a decent enough shot, it lacks a clear point of focus to draw my interest. The "school of law" seems to be well placed, but the way it curves out of easy visual range makes it feel like it just fizzles out. Likewise, the interesting windows are arranged in lines that lead the eye to the edge of the photo, but again, lack a balanced or harmonious feel.
TECHNIQUE
The main impression here is of a somewhat monochromatic image, with relatively low contrast. The grays really rule the day. Bumping the contrast up a bit may have paid off. I think the reflections in the lower windows are particularly unfortunate, since they add a bit of additional detail that fails to add any interest. Focus is sharp, but without any key element that draws the eye, it's technical adequacy without emotional impact.
OVERALL IMPACT
Pretty flat, I think. It's an attractive enough building, but I think you didn't find the pleasing angles or lines that would have really made it a 'wow' photo. Keep browsing the architectural photos on this site and others. Watch for how people make dramatic use of light, shadow, angles and perspective to add punch. |
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