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06/09/2003 09:32:06 PM |
*Critique Club*
The color and contrast of the painting and wall are good. Your focus appears to be pretty good too.
You have two problems with the entire image. First being the lighting glare, it left a big white spot that distracts from the painting itself. Secondly the big emptiness of the image There is nothing in the bottom half to look at. A floral arrangement on a table or a chair added to the left side of the image would have added something to it and balanced it out somewhat so you would be looking at something on the bottom instead of emptiness.
It does say Home to me so with that in mind it meets the challenge.
Anna |
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06/03/2003 10:05:39 AM |
| Interesting, although a bit too much glare |
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06/03/2003 12:43:06 AM |
| very interesting...I like it. |
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06/02/2003 10:39:56 PM |
| interesting shot, though I think that large light glaring off the wall is distracting. |
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06/02/2003 04:08:46 PM |
| i like that the frames are the same color. you should have made them match perfectly with beveling, etc. (of course, that would be illegal, but it would look cool for later). nice job. is that your original painting? self portrait? |
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06/02/2003 11:19:47 AM |
| Good placement of the picture, but as a photograph, this seems a little flat to me. |
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06/02/2003 04:39:46 AM |
| This is one of the best executed shots in this week's challenge. I like it. = 9 |
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05/30/2003 10:54:54 AM |
| This is a pretty weird photo if you don't mind me saying so. I like the painting, but the photo involves more than that. I like the bright spot on the wall and the use of negative space to really accentuate the painting. We are forced to look at it. My feeling is that it will not do very well, but I think its better than average. I really think you made the most of this bit of wall and the painting. Good job |
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05/29/2003 02:31:58 PM |
| Very... abstract. I gotta like the guys eyeballs. |
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05/29/2003 10:28:30 AM |
| Like the way you've framed the photo in the same colour as the painting - very clever effect. However, the fact that the main interest in this shot is another picture isn't great - feels uncreative. But I do like the picture, so you save yourself with your taste in paintings :) Who's it by? Quirky. |
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05/29/2003 05:58:33 AM |
| this is a good picture of an artwork, i don't see what was added here, like your interpretation of it... 3 |
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05/28/2003 11:11:52 PM |
| good use of negative space and light. |
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05/28/2003 02:38:35 PM |
| Seems to rely a bit much on the painting, unless your home is an art gallery? |
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05/28/2003 10:37:21 AM |
| Very clear shot. The glare on the wall is a bit nasty. Nice painting, whose art is it? 6 Rob the Swash |
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05/28/2003 10:14:51 AM |
| An interesting composition, but unless the artwork on the wall is also originally yours, I'd mostly be judging that rather than the photo. |
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05/28/2003 09:27:26 AM |
| Grat painting. Nice colors. I like the pure simpicity of this picture. Wish I had thought of it. The one distracting thing is the lighting. If you balance the lighting this would be perfect. A tiny bit sharper would be nice. |
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05/28/2003 07:17:51 AM |
| Hot spot on wall from flash. Nice framing though. |
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05/27/2003 08:42:53 PM |
| That bright spot (caused by the flash?) is a bit distracting, other then that it's ok. |
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