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09/18/2005 05:18:23 PM |
dramatic, engaging, wish I was a bit closer to the subject.. one of my favorites this challenge |
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09/18/2005 06:10:13 AM |
I like the contrasts in this photo and the expression and pose seem to tell a story! The background is nicely out of focus but the tree (?) in the left side is a bit distracting? |
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09/16/2005 04:48:16 AM |
Would have liked a little less headroom. |
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09/15/2005 06:44:25 PM |
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09/15/2005 05:52:05 PM |
Il ike the contrasting white wrap with her wonderful dark skin tones and the muted background. I find that one...tree? behind her head a bit distracting, but I really like this photo - she seems natural as opposed to other entries.
Good luck. :-) |
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09/15/2005 08:13:19 AM |
nice image but I think you could have knocked a solid half inch off of the sky. |
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09/14/2005 05:14:49 PM |
nice light, i feel it needs to be back lit some more..but i like the bg out of focus |
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09/14/2005 04:06:36 PM |
great mood and subject... a little more light on the subjects face would have helped for me as the features seem a little lost less defined than I would like... well done... :) |
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09/14/2005 09:46:15 AM |
a bit soft in the face but a very nice shot. excellent lighting and composition. nice warm colour. wish model was repositioned to block out-of-focus tree to the left. probably would crop a little bit from the top. 7/10 |
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09/14/2005 01:55:34 AM |
Great eye contact and expression. Love the wrap. I think it would have been absolutely beautiful if you had moved in closer filling up the frame with her and catching a bit more light in her eyes and on her face. 8 |
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09/13/2005 08:08:31 PM |
A good portrait... the focus seems a bit soft. |
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09/13/2005 07:13:35 PM |
Very Very pretty! I love your use of natural sunlight. Looks like the perfect time of day with nice warm light. She fits in nicely with the scene. It has a very exotic feel to it. Good job on using the white coverup and being able to keep the details while keeping it bright but not blownout. What I might do if this were mine would be to maybe dodge the eyes a slight bit to make them stand out a little more and maybe try to brighten her face just a bit more. But overall, I think this is a very nice portrait. Well Done |
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09/13/2005 04:36:56 PM |
wow, I love the statement this pose makes! it's almost like a freedom meets future ceo of america feeling. The only problem with th epose is the hair, it's very fuzzy and hangs across the left shoulder but other than that I like it. The makeup around the eyes doesn't really seem to match the face either. I like the use of dof and the emotion in her eyes. great shot |
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09/13/2005 06:31:05 AM |
Beautiful model. I think there is too much space above her. Also maybe more light on her face would have worked better. |
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09/13/2005 06:04:57 AM |
I like this, too bad you didn't have some dramatic lighting on her face. |
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09/12/2005 01:08:45 PM |
The lighting is too harsh and the background distracting. It looks like the brown things on the left are growing off her head. The horizon cuts the photo in half. |
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09/12/2005 10:53:25 AM |
I love the warmth of this shot, her smile too. Wonderful shot. |
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09/12/2005 10:48:37 AM |
Not quite sure what she is wearing. She looks more confined than peaceful. I find the background distracting--the tree and the horizon line. I would give a much higher score had you done a close crop (from the neck up) and had a solid background. |
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09/12/2005 06:40:15 AM |
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09/12/2005 05:20:38 AM |
Simply beautiful! I like tighter crops for portraits but this works well. Only the taller tree behind her take my eye off her. |
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09/12/2005 01:11:15 AM |
Wow, that is beautiful! I sure wish her face was a little more visible- might just be this monitor too- who knows? Fantastic portrait! |
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09/11/2005 11:16:28 PM |
Too much space on top. A closer composition or tighter crop would have been better. |
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09/11/2005 09:48:08 PM |
....at a loss for words....wow |
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09/11/2005 08:40:42 PM |
lovely. could be a bit brighter. |
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09/11/2005 08:36:08 PM |
beautiful portrait, I would of liked to seen a tighter crop but overall, gorgeous! |
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