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09/18/2005 06:12:36 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club and congrats on the high placement and score.
Obviously a solid image. I've read through the many comments you have already and will try not to repeat.
Suggestions: the midground is the weaker area (as the dof and bird are excellent) It's a bit cluttered with light colored branches and distracts my eye from the subject. The branch "growing" out the of the bird's head weakens the composition as well. I offer these observations not because you could necessarily control where the bird lands but more from a "here's what detracts" pov. Cropping out the right stick (from about the center and to the right edge) might simplify the compostion and remove some of the clutter -- just a thought.
Again, strong image and the suggestion is only one woman's opinion.
Please email me with any questions and Happy shooting :)
Theresa |
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09/13/2005 07:29:26 PM |
| Love the contrast between the colorful bird and the branches. |
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09/13/2005 05:58:41 PM |
| Beautiful composition and color--(I have know what camera brand you've used). Though I tend not to like frames, it works very well with this--this is a 10 in my book |
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09/13/2005 08:48:38 AM |
| a bit more focus on bird...nice depth of field...may center the bird more and vertical crop |
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09/13/2005 06:53:13 AM |
| I love the colors of the bird |
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09/10/2005 02:01:41 AM |
| The bird seems a bit out of focus, and the challenge response would have been more strong by relaxing the focus on the bird and backing off. Then it becomes a beautiful and colourful jewel on a limb (branch) which reclaims the dominance of the composition. |
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09/09/2005 10:32:17 AM |
| Nice shot! Vibrant colors in the bird. Good lighting. |
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09/09/2005 07:01:45 AM |
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09/08/2005 12:57:02 PM |
| brillian colours, nice composition, good cropping. |
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09/08/2005 09:45:11 AM |
| Awesome! I love this best of all so far! |
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09/08/2005 05:35:00 AM |
| Love the contrast of color here, maybe a tighter crop? |
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09/07/2005 06:44:06 PM |
| wow.. love the detail of the bird and branch.. Wow |
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09/07/2005 06:29:46 PM |
Loving it!! Birds are my fav. and Lorikeets are at the top of that list!
Thanks!! |
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09/07/2005 12:25:29 PM |
| Lovely sharp focus on the bird, and the colour and contrast are excellent. Background and branches are a bit distracting though, shallower DOF would have helped. |
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09/07/2005 11:04:10 AM |
| beautiful color. Nice composition. Good work ! |
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09/07/2005 09:27:02 AM |
| Nice crisp shot. The DOF may be a bit shallow and there are some blown highlights, but compositionally it's very appealing. Good work. |
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09/07/2005 04:09:24 AM |
| very colorful, nice dov, done well |
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09/06/2005 09:49:06 PM |
| i love the clarity on the bird.if this was a bird contest you would have won for sure. |
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