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09/18/2005 09:05:50 AM |
*Critique Club*
The first thing that I notice in this photograph is the waterfall, which is good, although the challenge was branch, your DOF is to small, you could have gone with a wider open DOF maybe 5.6 or so, this would give it focus from front to back, what i think happend here is you wanted the cotton candy effect for the water fall, so you used a slow shutter speed, but the wind was blowing which resulted in the leave being out of focus.
The color is good, i love the green
The border is a good touch
overall your photograph is a good shot,would be much better if the leaves were in focus,
Keep shooting, |
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09/13/2005 11:54:50 AM |
| awesome, I love this picture. 10 |
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09/12/2005 04:13:20 PM |
| wow it looks so surreal... cool... |
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09/12/2005 03:58:36 PM |
| Too noisy in some spots. I like the little waterfall--I wish the branch didn't interrupt it; you could say the waterfall was a branch of a river or something. |
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09/12/2005 03:58:28 PM |
| I like the water fall but i think the branch is very blurry. I mean it is a branch competition. Nice job though. I like the colors you used. |
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09/12/2005 08:22:17 AM |
| Interesting shot, nice colours. |
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09/11/2005 06:55:18 PM |
| Like the slower shutter on the water - very nice |
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09/11/2005 03:46:46 PM |
| A very well composed scene. In fact a field lesson in photographing moving water. |
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09/09/2005 07:26:35 AM |
| real pretty scene! I think I'd like to see the branch more in focus and the stream a little less prominent. |
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09/09/2005 12:51:18 AM |
| Beautiful shot. Personally I'd crop more off the top. The DOF/blurry top branch is a little distracting. |
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09/08/2005 05:09:01 PM |
| love the glow of the water! |
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09/08/2005 04:56:03 PM |
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09/08/2005 10:31:26 AM |
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09/07/2005 07:25:04 PM |
| I really wish the trees were in focus. |
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09/07/2005 01:46:21 PM |
| The scene is very nice, but the shot is ruined beause nothing appears to be in focus. |
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09/07/2005 10:45:18 AM |
| branch seems like it is there for sole purpose of satisfying challenge. would have been nice if the green from the leaves covered up the branches more |
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09/07/2005 03:22:26 AM |
| The focus has moved from the branch (which needs a more careful focal range) to the water falling (which would still be obvious without sharp focus, especially the way you have captured the light so well) |
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09/06/2005 09:46:17 PM |
| very nice contrast,very clear,very peaceful.i like it. |
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09/06/2005 09:02:57 PM |
| Wow... Beautiful rich tones and lovely composition. Very nice job. |
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09/06/2005 08:15:19 PM |
| The Branch, which should be the main subject for this challenge, is out of focus / Blurred. It appears as if waterfall is the main subject! 6. |
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