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09/14/2005 03:51:40 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
You have done a very pleasant abstract for this Challenge.
I would suggest that, while the two very hot areas in this image are certainly in high contrast to the remainder of the image, they are probably not enough to influence voters to judge it high in this category.
You obviouly had fun with the abstract itself with good colors and just enough in focus to give a foundation. I'd suggest moving that focus point into one of the sweet spots (rule of 3rds) to keep the viewer in the picture to enjoy the color patterns.
It's always fun to experiment with a good lens. I"ll look forward to seeing more of your work. |
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09/10/2005 08:40:08 PM |
| There is some contrast in your photo, but for me, the bottom 2/3rds is very, very close in tonal value. I like your border and how the object is off-centered. |
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09/10/2005 12:43:47 PM |
| Nice colors and an attractive abstract. The white light on the left bothers me, though. Other than that, the elements here (including the frame) work nicely together. |
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09/09/2005 09:30:48 PM |
| Great capture, love the focus. |
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09/09/2005 07:55:18 PM |
| a very good example of an abstract photo. couldve done beeter with the framing though |
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09/07/2005 01:56:12 AM |
| I'm gonna guess at a tuning head for a bass guitar. |
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09/06/2005 06:16:46 AM |
| IT could be a giutar or some stringed instrument, but it is just a great photo. Nice blending of colors. |
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09/05/2005 03:41:59 PM |
| Very visually appealing shot. It's interesting and intriguing, and I like the color & lighting contrasts. Nice work. |
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09/05/2005 07:54:34 AM |
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09/05/2005 05:28:12 AM |
| definitally abstract, colors are nice |
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