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09/16/2005 06:51:41 PM |
Critique Club
First Impression:
Nice minimalisitic photograph.
Nice contrast in color.
A bit flat in processing.
Composition
I like how its off centre horizontally. A different vertical crop might look better - perhaps place the central object in the lower third. Maybe even crop closer to make the subject a bit larger.
Processing
You mention that you slightly desaturated the orange. It seems a little too flat now. Maybe boost the orange saturation back up a little. Also, could sharpen some more.
Good luck in the future!
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09/12/2005 02:09:42 AM |
i love it, ian, and can't believe how overlooked and underrated this image is. my guess that going bw would have given it a bit of a bump. |
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Comments Made During the Challenge  |
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09/11/2005 06:26:27 PM |
You have the high contrast, but the subject doesn't have that same..."wow" impact as others in the challenge. |
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