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09/18/2005 10:47:29 AM |
Greetings from the Critque Club!
This is a lovely image, the colors of the grass and trees are very nice. The sky seems a bit blown out, could use a touch of adjustment to really bring out the blue which in turn would bring out the green even more.
I'm looking at your final score and guessing the reason for this is people, from looking at the winners, were looking for a more definitive branch, not a bunch together and you can't see many individual branches. Also the focus seems just a bit soft. Perhaps if you had gone for just the upper branches of some of the trees against the blue sky, cutting out all the bushes on the bottom it might have done better.
Also the composition, you are all filled in on the right for a frame but have a hole on the left and the top. The top would be okay if you have the left filled in, bringing you in and around the picture then back out the other side is my thought process here.
Oh and I see this is your first submission! Well congratulations on taking the plunge, it's really a nice shot overall, just a few tweeks here and there and it can be an awesome shot.
Deannda
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09/13/2005 07:54:31 PM |
| A very nice picture, though I don't see many branches. The composition is good but I would've rated it higher if I saw how it had to do with branches instead of having to do with just trees and nature. |
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09/12/2005 04:38:26 PM |
| Nice green scene, but it lacks a subject. |
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09/11/2005 06:55:31 AM |
Soft focus. This is a landscape. There is no clear highlighting of a branch.
Nice colours though |
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09/10/2005 01:23:44 AM |
| Doesn't say anything about branches, and not even a strong nature shot either, looking more like a poorly focused snapshot in your garden. |
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09/08/2005 09:11:47 PM |
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09/07/2005 08:16:04 PM |
| I'm sorry, I don't think this is a very nice nature competition. I am supposed to look at the overrun hedges and bushes? |
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09/07/2005 06:02:56 PM |
| I like how you used the trees at the top of your photo as frames. |
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09/07/2005 04:38:55 PM |
| It is nice for nature but I cant really see any branches. |
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09/07/2005 03:49:49 PM |
| Looks hazy, and alittle to plain for my taste |
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09/07/2005 09:17:40 AM |
| i'm sorry, but this is a terrible photograph |
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09/07/2005 04:52:43 AM |
| Overall softness to this picture spoils it and the harsh shadows. |
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