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10/09/2005 04:16:22 AM |
My favourite, but too "artistic" for DPChallenge...
Message edited by author 2005-11-13 01:28:53. |
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09/14/2005 10:22:14 PM |
Thanks for the coments: Basically, this is what You can get without a tripod and without knowing what is in front of the camera... I almost broke the camera in one of the holes in the "road"
Sfalice mentioned the title: Well, I wanted to point that movement is relative... in the picture road is moving and shoes and bicycle are stopped ... shoes are the motor of this Earth movement.
I will post later the second picture that I took, it is better but more "artistic", so I decided not to enter it because artistic is not a quality that perform well in Dpchallenge :) |
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09/13/2005 05:33:52 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club:
What a pleasure it is to see an image that is in perfect focus. Attention to photographic detail is wonderful. Lighting is fine.
Composition is a bit difficult, I think. It's hard to know precisely what you want the viewer to see as a main focal point. It was difficult to identify the yellow bar as part of a bicycle; a bit more bicycle would have helped. Again, I think this almost comes off as an abstract, but not quite.
And in this case, perhaps because of a language difference, the title didn't quite work. That beautifully photographed shoe doesn't look as if it is moving earth.
Nevertheless, my hat's off to you for technical excellence in this image. |
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09/06/2005 06:53:29 AM |
| I don't care for the composition you chose here, it's not enhancing your subject. Your title says moving earth, so I am guessing this might be a shovel? Without the title there isn't anything here that tells you what this action is or makes your subject stand out. |
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09/05/2005 10:13:11 PM |
| don't know how you shot this? |
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09/05/2005 02:58:25 PM |
Fit Challenge Criteria: 2/2
Color/Contrast: 1/2
Composition: 1/2
Photo Quality: 1/2
My Subjective Affinity: 0/2 |
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09/05/2005 10:02:14 AM |
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09/03/2005 05:57:03 PM |
| Wow, cool effect great idea! Good luck ;-) |
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09/02/2005 11:38:16 PM |
| Pretty awesome depthe of field and motion - 6 |
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09/01/2005 08:24:10 AM |
| Very original idea, interesting picture. I imagine that it must be difficult to take it with the bike moving with some velocity. I like it. :-) |
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08/31/2005 04:32:02 PM |
| I like the colors that are in this picture. I also like how the grass is a fading color.. The shoe being close up and being able to see the texture is good! |
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08/31/2005 03:30:27 PM |
| I like the movement of this picture. Took me a minute to realize he was on a bike! |
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08/31/2005 03:00:25 PM |
| good colour impact and different viewpoint scores hihg |
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08/31/2005 09:58:41 AM |
| I think this would have really looked great if we could see a bit more of the shoe. |
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08/31/2005 08:22:31 AM |
| Too close. I can't tell what's happening. Nice contrast, though, and I like how the dirt streaks. |
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08/30/2005 09:07:06 PM |
| i love the moving background. great pic and nice lighting |
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