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09/02/2006 10:42:38 AM |
| I recognize this model again. Once again, wonderful lighting. Very nice pose and a wonderful model. Nice shot. |
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08/30/2006 06:16:30 PM |
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11/20/2005 01:25:28 PM |
Really like this shot. The only blemish IMO is the hair resting on the left part of the neck. Wish it were a little more "posed" or "placed" if that makes sense!
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09/06/2005 09:23:46 AM |
it appears that the monitor you edited the pic on is too dark...
old monitors tend to be too dark.
try pushing up the brightness on your monitor and see what happens?
Good luck and congrats on your first challenge entry ;) |
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09/04/2005 05:56:04 AM |
| i was pretty happy with my scores on my first challenge pic so thank you everyone and thank you for the helpful comments, i'm learning so much! Something that confused me a little is that when i posted this pic from my computer it was very dark with only the right breast visible through a shaft of light and when i read some of the comments i wondered why ppl were saying that her eyes appeared to be open if they couldn't see them? So i looked at the pic on a friends computer and too my suprise it appeared completely different-the whole pic was light and my light shaft was non existant! Dunno if anyone can help me and tell me what happened, i'm not that computer literate to be able to understand how this happened?! |
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08/28/2005 07:09:25 PM |
| Looks a little bit flat! Nice model. |
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08/28/2005 03:41:14 PM |
| Nice pose, but you could have used a bit more contrast, IMO. Good work. |
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08/27/2005 08:50:54 PM |
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08/27/2005 08:30:30 PM |
| You've ended up with a rather flat B&W photo here from a good potential shot, I think some level tweaking in Post Production was called for or better lighting. |
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08/27/2005 04:39:15 PM |
| A bit dark and flat IMO. Interesting concept though. |
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08/27/2005 03:22:21 PM |
| I like the lowkey light setup here, the model should look into the camera though :-) Good luck 7 |
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08/26/2005 09:36:31 PM |
great body, nice hair & face, ok composition, rather dull lighting, good use of B&W though.
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08/26/2005 09:06:44 AM |
| maybe if she were looking toward camera the viewer could connect more with the subject, that and its too soft for me. |
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08/25/2005 12:58:08 PM |
... I took a picture of you to post on the Internet. (Sorry. I couldn't resist.)
It DOES look like you took a pic of a sleeping girl, so that kind of creeps me out a little. Looks like poor lighting rather than soft focus. |
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08/25/2005 06:21:02 AM |
what a lovely pic, it just seems a little flat, lacking something... wish i could tell what. You get the benefit, though, any one that posted a real nude must get a good score.
Revisiting and bumping up. This is a real good pic in every respect. |
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08/24/2005 09:04:57 PM |
| Lighting looks good, but it seems a little flat. |
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08/24/2005 07:20:21 PM |
| It looks like her eyes are open.:) I am not sure this is Nude challenge material. I agree that it is a nude photo, But I am wondering if it is "punchy" enough. I wish you the best of luck. |
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08/24/2005 07:18:08 PM |
| Good range of tones...model looks too shy, not facing more toward camera, but I had same problem with my model, can't fault photographer for that :) ... 7 |
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08/24/2005 06:41:50 PM |
| LOVELY. great model, very excellent pose. I think much like my submission, the lighting is a bit blah, and the hair on the near side of her neck is slightly more whispy than I would have let sit, but it's a good touch. |
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08/24/2005 12:37:39 AM |
| The ear is distracting. The lighting could use some adjusting. |
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08/23/2005 10:15:26 PM |
| the model looks a little stiff. like the ligtting and the positioning otherwise. |
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08/23/2005 04:13:48 PM |
| I think a little more contrast (or maybe a little brightening of the the skin tones) would add a zing to this image. Maybe a different position of the neck/head and or the arms, just to give a slightly more natural look to the pose. I like the lighting and how the shadows work with the very dark bg. Well done! |
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08/23/2005 06:03:01 AM |
| The lighting is nice and gives some modeling to the shape. The composition is a bit boring. It looks like it's underexposed. |
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08/22/2005 07:38:49 PM |
| IMHO needs more contrast. 6 |
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08/22/2005 07:20:09 PM |
| i must have cruised by this photo the first time - this is actually quite nice. The lighting is simplistic, as is the pose, but it has a sort of 'sleeping beauty' mood to it which i like. |
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08/22/2005 06:32:52 PM |
| I like the use of the strong diagonal here. The skin tones look great, and the head turning slightly away shows just enough features to hold some interest. I wonder if the addition of something small could boost the impact of the shot a little. Maybe if her hand lay across her stomach and she had a ring on, or maybe an ear ring that remained in color as the rest of the image was b/w. The attractive model never hurts either, good shot. |
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08/22/2005 05:26:14 PM |
| a little too lifeless. The lowered contrast isn't bad, but if you look at the eventual winners, you will see a difference in lighting quality. 7. |
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08/22/2005 04:56:04 PM |
| I enjoy low key work, but I'd like to see at least half of her face. Also from what I can see, the pose looks too stiff, and brings a sense of awkwardness (which is expected with this kind of photograph, at least to folks who dont do this regularly). Next time, a different pose, something more sensual, and show a little face, and you'll have a wonderful photo. |
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08/22/2005 03:30:37 PM |
| very emotive pic, well done |
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08/22/2005 02:45:53 PM |
Great intimacy portrayed here.
nice photo. Lighting seems to work ok. Maybe cropping a bit further to the right so the ear wasn't chopped would have been better. |
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08/22/2005 01:10:46 PM |
Beautiful model, she just looks VERY uncomfortable.
She is clearly awake. The pose looks very stiff and awkward and the image as a whole is too low contrast. |
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08/22/2005 12:12:08 PM |
| but her eye's are open...? |
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08/22/2005 12:04:48 PM |
| ... with her eyes open. She doesn't seem to be relaxed about this. And I would have liked to see the whole head. |
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08/22/2005 11:25:56 AM |
| Hum..it is cold, very cold. Sorry, but she doesn't seems alive. |
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08/22/2005 10:29:47 AM |
| Nice, serene shot. I like the use of the hair. Well done. |
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08/21/2005 10:19:33 PM |
| the shot has some room for technical improvement such as contrast and tonal range. |
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08/21/2005 10:14:45 PM |
"while you were sleeping" your husband took this photo of you and entered it in a challenge where it will be permanently on display on the internet. LOL
I sure hope that's not the case. Beautiful woman. The lighting is a little dark, but good. The pose doesn't do much for the image though. Overall good job. |
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08/21/2005 08:13:40 PM |
| Nice show of contour. I wish the light that is visible were a tad stronger. |
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