*Critique Club*
FIRST IMPRESSION: Green. Very, very green. Quite bright, and I knew before I even saw the challenge title that this is for "The Matrix" challenge.
CHALLENGE: Given that, it meets the challenge quite well. I can envision the scene from the movie that this shot may be based upon.
COMPOSITION: Framed OK, maybe a little high at the top. The door position within the frame works well, as does the tunnelling effect of looking down the hallway.
TECHNICAL: Seems a good bit blown out on the right side, and through the doors. Because of this overexposure, the floor is washed out, and the contrast between light and dark on the two sides of the photograph is too pronounced.
CONCLUSION: A good interpretation of the challenge, with some technical issues that detracted from the shot. The color adjustments you did to make it green may have been a bit better with a slightly darker color, given the overly bright side of the photo.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges! |
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