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08/28/2005 05:32:19 PM |
| Nice shot. Good lighting / tones. I wish her lip wasn't cut off, though. |
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08/28/2005 07:59:33 AM |
| Like the tones/high contrast of the image. I wish you had done more or less of the head. Crop/composition, POV, DOF all good. |
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08/28/2005 12:50:44 AM |
| This photograph would be stronger if the top edge of the model's lips weren't cut off by the edge of the frame. |
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08/27/2005 08:14:56 PM |
| Great composition and lighting. |
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08/27/2005 07:15:45 PM |
| nice high key effort. I would of really liked it in portrait rather than landscape and had her face in it a little more. nice model! well done. |
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08/27/2005 06:46:16 AM |
| I think this pose and lighting would have benefitted a bit by having a background. The crop on the face is sort of in an odd spot and the lighting is a little harsh, so maybe if there was an attractive background it could help to make the image a little more pleasing. As it is it's a beautiful model and a decent pose....just something is lacking for me to make it a great shot. |
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08/27/2005 01:57:04 AM |
| I don't understand why this needed validated. Beautiful picture, excellent lighting and lovely skin tones. Very good work. 10 |
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08/26/2005 07:36:13 PM |
| Nice shot, but to improve composition without showing your models face, try focusing on a specific characteristic (body part, etc.). The half-face and towel distract from what seems to be your intended subject. |
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08/26/2005 12:59:02 PM |
| I don't really like the cropping on this, the lips have been cut off too severely, I woud have prefered to see a touch more face. |
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08/25/2005 07:33:28 PM |
| This is a good shot. The contrast is nice. |
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08/25/2005 07:12:11 PM |
| One of my favorites for the challenge, even though it's a little blown out in spots. |
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08/25/2005 04:41:47 PM |
| Interestin composition with great tones to enhance the sensuality. Bumping up. |
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08/25/2005 10:30:13 AM |
| if there were still detail on the towel, this would get a lot more points from me. as it is, the pure and glowing white makes the cut-off shape oddly disconcerting.looks like you used the camera's built-in flash or maybe a hotshoe pointing straight forward. in this case, it's made interesting lines around the breasts, but on the arm and chin they do not flatter. a natural light source or a softer light with a different angle would have showcased this obviously lovely model much better. |
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08/24/2005 08:57:40 PM |
| crop off the bottom white thing and this would have been nice |
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08/24/2005 07:58:14 PM |
| very nice shot, the static in the hair, as well as the loops of what looks like hair on the other side of her chin are distracing. OI can barely tell that it's not, but I'd guess that the areas where her arms dissappear into probably a robe or a towel looks a bit edited, and a bit odd in it's context. Good luck. |
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08/24/2005 10:05:03 AM |
| Beautiful shot, lighting is great on the model (very beautiful btw) and the pose looks relaxed and natural. |
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08/24/2005 08:30:45 AM |
| I´d like to see the face of the model. The rest of the pic is good. 6 |
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08/23/2005 08:17:20 PM |
| Very nice. Lighting seems a bit harsh and direct though. |
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08/23/2005 08:16:54 PM |
| It looks as if you used straight on-camera flash causing the closest breast to seem oddly lighter than the other one. The thing that is really unfortunate is the way the model's upper lip was cropped out. To me, these problems make this seem more of a snapshot than an attempt to capture the beauty of the model. |
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08/23/2005 07:49:27 AM |
| Composition is interesting, unfortunatly i do not enjoy the way the face was cut (cutting parts of the upper lips take away from the 'erotica' feel for the picture). Lighting is somewhat weak as it brings good blacks but too much whites. A bit void on the left makes this picture a little too open for my taste. 6 |
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08/23/2005 07:44:20 AM |
| why was it necessary to have this photo validated? in any case, seems like the iso setting was a bit high because noise is noticeable. still a very nice shot. |
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08/23/2005 01:55:42 AM |
| what a pic if only we could also see a face... |
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08/22/2005 08:01:43 PM |
Well done technically, but boring compositionally. 6.
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08/22/2005 06:44:12 PM |
| I like the skin tones and how they contrast with the white bg. Nice focus and dof, well done. |
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08/22/2005 05:16:44 PM |
| I like the white background. I like the contrast between her skin and hair, and the background. Great shot. |
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08/22/2005 04:49:04 PM |
| that is naomi campbell isn't it??? |
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08/22/2005 02:26:31 PM |
| including more of her face and lower torso would have made this a better composition IMO otherwise well captured |
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08/22/2005 01:22:17 PM |
| Nice shot - not so keen on the croping at the head. I would like to have seen that included. But excellent exposure and tonal range captured. Lovely pose too. |
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08/22/2005 01:00:00 PM |
| Great capture.... maybe just a hair to high key though... the robe/towel is completely blown out. |
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08/22/2005 12:15:10 PM |
The lighting and the image are nice, but I don't like the crop.
The mouth is somehow distraction, berhaps as it is partially cropped. |
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08/22/2005 10:50:05 AM |
| Had this as a 9, then bumped it to 10. The lips make the picture. Perhaps just a tad harsh lighting on her left breast (that was the original beef, but I overlooked it) |
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08/22/2005 10:35:41 AM |
This image has a lot of potential. The lighting is great and the pose is interesting.
I cant help but wonder why you left such a small amount of towel in the image - the towel is blown out and doesnot add to the composition. I also would have liked to see the top cropped just a tiny bit higher to encompass the models entire lip - she has such lovely full lips that compliment the entire image nicely, it is a shame to have cut them just a tiny bit short. |
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08/22/2005 08:36:30 AM |
| This has more of a quick snap feel to me. Maybe use a soft filter would have helped a bit. |
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08/22/2005 07:00:28 AM |
| i think the cloth near the bottom is an unnecessary distraction bcos is cuts the figure abruptly with and also it blends with the white background and has little to no detail. |
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08/22/2005 01:53:32 AM |
| Very good title for this image. Very attractive model, who is well lit and photographed in a very tasteful manner. I like the skin tones, and the texture in the hair. The only thing I would have liked to see different is more detail in what ever the white object is at the bottom. Otherwise a very stunning image, you should be very proud of. <8> |
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08/21/2005 10:29:46 PM |
| Classic looking. A nicely done shot. Not sure about the crop, but not totally unhappy about it. |
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08/21/2005 08:21:53 PM |
| I like the composition, though the (?)towel(?) at the bottom of the shot distracts me a lot. It breaks up the otherwise smooth lines and curves. |
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08/21/2005 08:11:02 PM |
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