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07/02/2004 01:51:05 PM |
| I have to agree with everybody pretty much. The curved plate is awesome. Very nice lines. I think it was very creative use of cheetohs. The cheetohs and the table cloth have very nice texture. The whole shot I think has a nice "feel" between the textures and colors. I like the composition. Only improvement I can see, and it is minor, is a little bit of adjustment to the lighting. It seems just a wee bit bright coming in on bottom left. It is not very distracting at all, just a thought. Maybe a little editing could do it. It is a nice shot overall. Very pleasing to the eye. |
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06/30/2004 07:06:36 PM |
I like this the depth of focus it is near perfect... but for the second cheese thing from the bottom it seems to be to close, moved back half an inch it would be fine (or just USM it a bit)
it is great how you picked up the weave in the table cloth
and as the others have said great use of color and composition |
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06/30/2004 06:16:18 PM |
This one has the 3 c's - Clarity, color, and composition. I was expection mac & cheese from the thumbnail, so it was a bit of a surprise. You picked just the right plate to make this look artistic - the blue is the perfect shade and the curved lines really help the look of the photo.
It's not something I would hang on my wall, but for what it is it's very well done I think. |
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06/30/2004 06:05:46 PM |
| Very nice cheesy shot, ha, ha! I like your color and the composition is great. |
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06/30/2004 05:25:22 PM |
| I love the complimentary color arrangement here...very vibrant. I also like the composition. Who knew a cheeto could be interesting? :o) |
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06/30/2004 05:24:26 PM |
| Excellent colors. I like the comp and the curves in the plate. Nice job. |
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05/28/2003 12:19:17 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club:
By CLarson557
Hi, Steve
By the way, I would like to congratulate you on your highest rated photo on DPC. You are developing a good eye for photography.
Composition: I like the corner placement of your subject and the Cheetos are nicely arranged on the plate.
Technical: You have good DOF and focus here. You picked up the texture of the Cheetos as well as the ridges in the plate. The lighting is apporpriate. My only complaint might be with the reflection of what appears to be you taking the picture showing up on the lower left part of the plate. Slight distraction, maybe, but I'm just trying to pull up something. So, very minor.
Challenge: The vibrant orange and blue colors, of course, meet the challenge perfectly. Nicely done.
Overall: I agree with a couple of the comments below...that this picture could very easily be used in a magazine ad for Cheetos. It is fun and appealing. I feel as if I could reach in the computer and pluck a cheesy snack.
Good luck in future challenges. Will be anxious to see what you come out with. |
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05/26/2003 09:10:02 PM |
| I'm glad this one placed in the top 20. It was my kids' favorite! Bet you can guess why! |
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05/25/2003 07:27:06 PM |
| Fine colors; sharp focus; superb composition; interesting image. Good work! |
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05/25/2003 07:19:17 AM |
| Super DOF, great composition! |
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05/24/2003 06:18:45 PM |
| the lighting seems a little bit bright, but great contrast and composition. reminds me of mac and cheese. :) 8 |
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05/23/2003 05:17:21 PM |
| Great use of complementary colors! This is a 10 in my book. |
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05/23/2003 11:12:06 AM |
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05/22/2003 07:32:49 PM |
| Interesting choice of subjects, but it works well. I like the dual contrast between the textures and colors. |
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05/22/2003 06:42:24 PM |
| Bee- you-tee-full!!!! Perfect in every way. |
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05/22/2003 03:59:14 PM |
Crunchy orange worms, my favorite snack!
Nice. Very home-entertainment-magaziney, I could picture it as an ad (I like good commercial work, so this is a compliment). Or accompanying an article on, I don't know, the evil of overly processed cheese. And very definitely topical. |
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05/20/2003 02:54:16 PM |
| the lighting is a little bright, but nice and bold! |
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05/20/2003 06:20:51 AM |
| *drool*...nice focus and use of depth of field. couldn't you have used a white piece of paper under the plate to wash out the background more? 6 |
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05/20/2003 05:16:01 AM |
| not my favorite subject ever but it's set up well and i like th swooping curve and lines against the raw texture of the cheetos |
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05/20/2003 01:57:05 AM |
| Very clear and detailed. This pic just sprang out at me and said "give me a ten", so that's what I'm doing - 10! |
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05/19/2003 07:23:52 PM |
Ximena (8 yrs old) sais: "That's cool ... and tasty!"
Added note: Good picture, good complementary colours, nice simple border - 8 |
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05/19/2003 02:53:29 PM |
| good subject, balanced composition |
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05/19/2003 01:50:38 PM |
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05/19/2003 10:38:42 AM |
| Funny idea, good composition and lighting = 8 |
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05/19/2003 03:46:20 AM |
| very nicely done... this is a strong composition and the complementary colors are very powerful in this image... It looks like a good product photo as well... makes me hungry :) = 7 |
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05/18/2003 08:18:30 PM |
Sharp focus, great DOF, lovely colors. Great shot.
Mark |
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