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06/09/2002 07:31:00 PM |
| Seems to be a slight tilt problem... this photo lacks interest. |
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06/09/2002 11:59:00 AM |
| I think this either needs to be more drammatically tilted than it now is, or straightened so that it's level. The little bit of a tilt makes it feel like it's accidental and not intentional. I'd also suggest a slightly tighter crop, if possible, to remove the support post that's along the left side of the image. That would move your subject further to the left and make use of rule of thirds too. |
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06/09/2002 10:18:00 AM |
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06/08/2002 11:44:00 PM |
| The reflected light from the open book is perfect for lightening the shadows there. Good focus and clarity. Don't know if the black bit of architecture at L adds anything, and certianly needs a CCW rotation. I'd straighten the horizontals, then crop tighter on the man. Still nice. |
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06/07/2002 09:19:00 PM |
| Reader's face is a little too bright for my taste. Image is a little slanted. |
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06/07/2002 08:47:00 PM |
| Good shot, however, it seems that the photo is not quite level. |
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06/07/2002 11:11:00 AM |
| This is a good shot but the black bar on the left side is distracting. If rotated and taken with the subject on the lower half this would of really done it for me. Still its a clean photo with nice tones and shades. |
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06/06/2002 03:05:00 PM |
| needs a level horizon. Good exposure, B/W conversion though. |
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06/06/2002 05:04:00 AM |
| Nice, peaceful, contemplative shot. I like that it's slightly skewed, although some people are probably suggesting that's wrong. It makes it seem more candid. |
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06/05/2002 07:08:00 PM |
| I believe the blacks and whites contrast well, there's something about the tilt that bothers me and the fact that you almost lose the subject in all that's surrounding him. The black area to the left is bothersome to me as well. |
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06/05/2002 03:11:00 PM |
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06/05/2002 12:29:00 PM |
| I think cropping or framing it so that the pole-thing wasn't in it and moving the subject to the left would have made it more balanced. I kinda get the feeling you were hiding somewhere and were trying to take the shot without him seeing you. |
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06/05/2002 12:02:00 PM |
| Great tonal range. Very sharp. I do not like the quirky framing. |
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06/04/2002 11:20:00 AM |
| ergh, i wish this wasn't tilted, i love the lighting and architectural elements |
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06/04/2002 06:11:00 AM |
| The dark column on the left bothers me a little bit. maybe if you had either moved a bit closer, or if that was not possible, cropped it out. |
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06/04/2002 06:01:00 AM |
| uh, the bench is slanted...he's going to slide off!...oh, maybe that's just because you didn't hold the camera straight. lol |
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06/03/2002 05:34:00 PM |
| nice contrast of the bench nice shot |
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06/03/2002 04:09:00 PM |
| I feel like he is going to slide off the bench... is it just me or are we in SF? |
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06/03/2002 03:06:00 PM |
| This photo should definitely be re-framed to remove the dark strip from the left edge... that is accenting the tilt to the right on the camera quite a bit... |
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06/03/2002 12:42:00 PM |
| If the bench had been horizontal this would have been a much beter photo. |
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06/03/2002 11:49:00 AM |
| Nice shot. Good coverage of the scale. |
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06/03/2002 11:22:00 AM |
| Bit tilted to the right although this is a fine b&w shot. |
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06/03/2002 03:24:00 AM |
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