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05/27/2003 09:43:25 AM |
*Critique Club*
I can see to the right of this photo, that this plant produces some really pretty flowers. I am wondering why you did not focus more on the actual flowers rather than half blooms.
Also, the brown slimy looking thing protruding from the top of the photo is not only a bit of a distraction, but kind of grossing me out as well. lol I don't find that part appealing much at all.
Did you just use flash on this? I'm wondering because it seems dark in some places, and the water drops are a bit bright. The overall lighting on the petals are ok, but some harsh shadows are created and also the inner part of the plant is dark.
Focus and clarity look ok to me as well. I think that you show some good detail in the petals and the water drops.
I think that the overall shot is a bit busy. There really isn't a focal point. I think that if you were to put the main focus on the pretty opened up flowers, that might help to create something to look at, rather than just our eyes wandering around searching for it.
The color is good, which is important for the purpose of this challenge. It's a good solid purple, which definately fits the challenge.
~Heather~ |
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05/20/2003 10:32:43 AM |
| nice job i really like the colors |
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05/20/2003 09:24:38 AM |
| nice use of color and i like the water on the flowers it brings alot of intrest to the picture. |
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05/18/2003 04:23:30 PM |
| i like the water drops. the only think i don't like is that brown thing on the top left-hand corner |
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05/18/2003 10:04:15 AM |
| good choice of color subject... the lighting doesn't seem to be helping tremendously... maybe an on cam flash... this particular view doesn't seem to highlight the beauty of the flowers as much as something else may have... = 5 |
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05/16/2003 05:05:58 PM |
| Nice detail, but uninteresting composition. |
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05/16/2003 08:46:08 AM |
| Good colours but very busy image. |
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05/15/2003 09:44:24 PM |
| Beautiful color and clarity.=7 |
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05/14/2003 04:47:04 PM |
| I love the clarity of this photo, and the water is such a nice touch |
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05/14/2003 08:33:17 AM |
| lovely color and light but the image is too crowded needs more focus. |
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