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05/22/2003 05:29:52 PM |
*Critique Club*
This is a nice image. It makes me smile thinking that some kids played in it. I don't know what it was really for, but that's what my imagination is telling me.
The focus on the hut seems just a slight bit soft. Nothing that really hurts the photo at all. The angle and framing/cropping is good. I like the larger green leaves to the right. I think they frame nicely, and help 'hide' the hut.
I wonder if some saturation adjustments would help to bring out the greens in the leaves. There are a few different colors of green there, and I like that a lot.
I wouldn't say that the green is the main focus of the photo. I think that the main focus is the little hut, which is fine, but for the challenge, I think that the green should just scream to be the center of attention. The green loses the battle here against this cute little hut.
Still a nice find though.
~Heather~ |
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05/20/2003 03:46:23 PM |
| great little play hut...... could have adjusted the levels to bring out the colours more....... good luck.......6 |
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05/20/2003 11:22:03 AM |
| A bit depressing, but there is something... |
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05/20/2003 09:38:04 AM |
| nice idea but i think that the picture would have been better if the house was a little more hidden |
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05/17/2003 06:49:40 AM |
| Your point of view really make this old shack look smothered in green. |
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05/14/2003 11:14:33 PM |
| where was this taken? i can relate to this picture, a 6 |
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05/14/2003 06:37:24 PM |
| Exposure seems good. For composition and impact I would have shown more of the path leading to the hut leading the viewer into the image. |
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05/14/2003 05:17:57 PM |
| I would say the subject of your picture isn't green. |
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05/14/2003 11:04:55 AM |
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05/14/2003 09:25:08 AM |
| it's probably the hut that is tilted but it makes the whole picture seem tipped. What if you straighten the doorframe? |
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