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07/29/2005 02:00:36 AM |
:: Critique Club ::
Usually I start off by telling what is wrong with the photo but there is very little here. So I will start by telling you what I think would have made this photo better.
The placement of the subjects is good but I would prefer that you give a little more room above the top plane the cropping is just a tad to tight. The smoke does a great job of leading you eyes good use of it. The red and white work well with the clear sky.
I believe that it would help to see a little more of the planes as well. Maybe just wait a second till they turned more. Over all this is a technically good photo I would say well above average.
Feel free to PM me if you have any questions for me thanks for your time.
Nick
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07/24/2005 12:06:43 AM |
| Well done ev a great result. |
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07/23/2005 09:18:15 AM |
| Well captured and nice colors 7 |
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07/23/2005 05:37:11 AM |
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07/19/2005 11:56:41 PM |
| EXCELLENT composition for this aerial flyer shot. I rated another one earlier in this challenge, but I am rating this one much higher. Well done. |
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07/19/2005 08:28:27 AM |
| Very exciting and excellent capture. |
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07/19/2005 03:57:17 AM |
| Great capture - love the trails. Could be independent in many ways including the right to not release smoke. Not serious comment - not independent due to being together - looking for at least top ten here. |
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07/18/2005 04:08:40 PM |
| One of the best shots I've seen of flying aircraft (and not just in this challenge... but ever!) (7) |
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07/18/2005 03:29:26 PM |
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07/18/2005 06:39:18 AM |
| I wish I could take shots like this... |
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07/17/2005 07:11:12 PM |
| Very nice capture. The sky is a beautiful blue and the focus is excellent. The planes are well positioned in the picture. I feel as if they will fly out of the computer screen at me. 10 |
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07/17/2005 04:01:09 AM |
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07/17/2005 03:52:36 AM |
| Nice shot. Crop seems a little tight - the top plane doens't have a lot of room. It's great that the subjects are coming inot the frame - creates lots of visual interest. Good job with te color of the sky - this is really quite nice. |
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07/17/2005 03:31:40 AM |
| Good capture, perfectly cropped. |
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