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07/25/2005 09:31:02 PM |
| Plenty of attractions here, and although the couple dominated initial moments, I find myself getting drawn to the child and the pram. Lots of grasping going on. I'd have scored this 8 or better. Sorry I was away :( |
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07/25/2005 08:01:50 PM |
| Not easy ro pull off this image with the excitement of the crowd. Love the flavor it imparts. |
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07/25/2005 07:28:13 AM |
| This was my favorite shot of the challenge. Nice tone and composition. I also like your title. Very fitting. I gave you a 10. |
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07/24/2005 12:26:28 AM |
wish i had had time to vote, aznym, i'm sure my vote would have put you over 6.0
excellent work! |
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07/23/2005 07:01:22 PM |
| This is nice photo. I love the black and white. Would not have been the same in color!! GOOD JOB! |
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07/23/2005 01:03:42 PM |
| I love that there are two distinct stories of independence in this image in the young child and the loved-up couple. Only problem is that there is so much going on in the background that the foreground loses some of it's impact. A really shallow DOF might have made this less of an issue. 7 |
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07/22/2005 08:48:29 PM |
| nice composition...for some reason through all the chaos, the focus remains on the couple kissing. |
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07/22/2005 09:28:22 AM |
| the high contrast is good, though maybe just a bit too much. it's a nice candid, i especially like the guy in the back with the coffee. |
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07/20/2005 03:16:24 AM |
Too much shadow for me, it would be nice to see a wider tonal range.
I wonder if the guy kissing the girl is about to steal her bag? |
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07/19/2005 09:03:20 PM |
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07/19/2005 02:26:05 AM |
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07/18/2005 04:15:54 PM |
| A tighter crop may have served you better. Great idea but there's too much going on and it takes a while for me to figure out who's the subject. |
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07/17/2005 09:57:47 PM |
| IS the shot the child of the kissing couple? |
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07/17/2005 06:33:42 PM |
| A lot of life here. Nicely captured. |
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07/17/2005 12:48:53 PM |
| I don't know what this is a photo of. From the title I think it'sthe kissing, but visually I'm drawn to the kid. Very visually confusing even without the title. |
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07/17/2005 11:52:19 AM |
| This is a tricky shot to score in a challenge..I first am drawn to the couple kissing but then my eyes float ove rto the child and parent..an interesting combination, almost like a glimpse into their future..not sure where you see the independence, as the title throws me off..interesting shot nonetheless. |
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07/17/2005 07:46:46 AM |
Subject Impact: High
Meets Challenge: High
Technical: Average
Composition: Average
Creativity: Average
Score: 7 |
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07/17/2005 04:16:54 AM |
| I like the documentary type treatment here. |
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07/16/2005 11:54:52 PM |
| The fact that the couple is on the left side of the frame makes me assume that there is some importance to seeing the mother and stroler. But I don't think that importance was intended. I think that space could have been used better. In fact, a different title could actually make this photo about the right side of the frame. I don't know if this was set up but I like how the girl is leaning into the guy. I has this classic feel of the strong, verticle man kissing the girl off her feet. The color selection is just right and the contrast is great. Just needs a better crop or better timing. |
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07/16/2005 08:32:32 PM |
| Love this shot, so much going on. Minor complaint is that it is a tad on the dark side, but otherwise excellent! Doesn't scream independence to me, but then again neither do most of the others - 9 |
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