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07/25/2005 06:50:38 AM |
:: Critique Club ::
Well I guess I'll start with the lighting, it is a little harsh causing dark shadows most noticeable under the chin. There is a lot of reflection off the person's face.
There doesn̢۪t appear to have much effort put into the photo, it looks like a snapshot when you where messing around with some buddy̢۪s. Showing the object that hit him would have help as well as stepping back to capture more of your subject. Because you are so close his head seams to be disproportioned to his shoulders as well.
The background doesn̢۪t help the photo either you lose the persons hair in it. The dots next to his mouth are distracting as well. Lighting would have helped this as well. If you were trying to convey boxing try hinting at it in the background too, Like maybe seeing people sitting behind red white and blue ropes.
I hope this has helped feel free to PM me if you have any questions or would like more clarification on anything. Thank you.
Nick
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07/19/2005 01:41:21 PM |
| 1 - DMC - No discernible creativity or effort here for the challenge. |
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07/19/2005 06:25:24 AM |
| Would have been more in context if you could have seen part of the boxing glove or whatever it was that hit him. Doesnt fit category as it stands here. |
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07/17/2005 12:06:29 PM |
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07/16/2005 07:11:54 AM |
(1-2) Below Average (3) Average (4-5) Above Average
Challenge Relevance 2:
Contrast / Colors :3
Creativity / Originality :2
Composition / Eye Appeal: 1
a little blood would have been nice. |
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07/16/2005 05:31:48 AM |
| Good expression and sense of movement however if the fist were shown in the picture and the zoom was a little less the message would come across much better. |
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07/15/2005 06:10:54 PM |
| What a strange photo. It is very still, but there are subtle hints that it is actually in motion. |
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07/15/2005 09:43:31 AM |
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07/15/2005 02:12:03 AM |
all i can say is "what an interesting take on the challenge". i have no idea what this is conveying--it almost looks like someone with their faced smashed up against a window...
you might want to check out this thread. good luck! |
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07/14/2005 05:03:22 AM |
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07/14/2005 02:25:51 AM |
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07/13/2005 08:16:46 PM |
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07/13/2005 01:35:47 PM |
| I am not sure I understand how this fits the challenge maybe boxing or some kind of fighting but very unclear. |
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07/13/2005 01:08:16 PM |
| face on scanner/window shot. I need to see a glove with a ball here. |
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07/13/2005 11:25:53 AM |
| yeah thats nice and all but what does it have to do with the challenge?! |
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07/13/2005 07:46:45 AM |
| What exactly is the sport? |
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