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07/13/2005 08:00:54 PM |
*Critique Club*
YUMMY!! Man, I want some ice cream now!! I love what you chose to take a picture of. My few suggestions would have been to have more light and tone down the hot spot. I think that it needs to be present because you can see that it is smooth and shiny. I love the background, however, I wish there was more detail in the ice cream and hot fudge. Overall-I think that this is a nice shot. And the reason I feel that it is not GREAT for this challenge is because a cherry has no texture to it. It looks the same real close up as it does from a normal distance. There is nothing revealed by the camera that you can't see for yourself. I think what makes a GREAT macro is when the camera has zoomed in sooo much that textures and colors are noticed only by your image and not right away by your eye. I hope this was helpful, I'm trying to get better at this. Good luck to you and God Bless.
Mandy |
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07/10/2005 07:51:38 PM |
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07/10/2005 12:09:33 PM |
Yummy, perfect composition, but this needs to be bit lighter |
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07/09/2005 06:03:37 PM |
MMm i'm hungry now. Good shot, just a tad dark. |
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07/08/2005 04:26:14 AM |
Good idea. I think I would have liked it better with a more colorful backround. |
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07/07/2005 07:00:52 PM |
I like the subject (yum!) and I think the composition is very nice. The black background along with the dark red cherry makes the picture too dark IMO. Nice work. |
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07/07/2005 06:42:22 PM |
seems a bit too dark but sure looks yummy 7 |
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07/07/2005 05:42:20 PM |
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07/05/2005 06:34:25 AM |
I like how the chocolate blends into the background. Makes you think there is a sea of hot fudge behind it all! |
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07/04/2005 07:44:34 AM |
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Photographer found comment helpful. |
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07/04/2005 07:33:43 AM |
Base: 5
Tech: +2
Subj:+2
Chln:
Total: 9
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Photographer found comment helpful. |
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07/04/2005 07:03:21 AM |
It's nice to see something besides a flower or a bug. I like the composition of ths a lot with the black background and the vibrant red. Good luck. |
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07/04/2005 02:05:39 AM |
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07/03/2005 11:26:56 PM |
Creative and excellent composition. I would have liked to see the light on the stem to be a bit more consistent. |
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07/03/2005 08:52:18 PM |
the spot of light on the cherry needs to be cloned out |
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