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05/09/2003 06:43:47 PM |
Hi Gina - I don't think you could have done better on sharpness and DOF. This is a powerful image. Without including any obvious label saying "Jaguar", you've let us know that we're looking at a Jag! The ONLY thing I would like to see is a slight (very slight) toning down of the brightness on the left so that the bumper isn't quite so wiped out. That pulls my eye away from the rest. In composition, you've done a good job of having triangular points in the picture. This leads the eye from one to the other to the third point and back again --- keeping the viewer's interest and attention within the photo. The "Meeow" is also a cute touch giving a little lightheartedness to the image.
Oh, and I would say that you definately met the challenge. Great representation of "Transportation" (pretty classy transportation, too!)
Regards ... for the Critique Club,
Bob Mahan
(rmahan)
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05/06/2003 01:38:24 PM |
| I like this shot because of the light "stars" and the angle and crop you decided upon. I would have cut out the license plate, but I can see why you probably kept it in-- to make the title totally obvious! My only quibble is thew wicked bad shadow on there.. is that your shadow? ;) |
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05/05/2003 04:34:52 PM |
| Shadow added some nice contrast to the shot. Very sharp with decent composition. Yours? Or taken at the dealer? |
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05/03/2003 05:16:47 PM |
| Very crisp, but I'm not sure the shadow is working for you here. |
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05/03/2003 05:43:47 AM |
| I like that this is split with shadow and sun. Good use of the 6pt star filter. Gives it that little something extra without being way too much. |
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05/02/2003 02:03:53 PM |
| OOooooh, a Jag!!! Like the star filter you have used - makes it look even more expensive than it is (if that's possible). |
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05/02/2003 09:08:49 AM |
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05/02/2003 06:22:03 AM |
| Sparkles look very cool and it`s nice and sharp. Lightings a bit uneven though. |
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05/01/2003 10:52:06 PM |
| Great shot. Love the sparkle effect. That number plate is funny. |
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05/01/2003 08:19:38 PM |
| Nice shine - I like the star effects on the bumper and the headlight. |
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05/01/2003 11:13:04 AM |
| Love the pristine condition of the car, the glint of sun on the bumper, and the 'registration plate' - pity about the shadow across the MEEOW ... a dealer's car yard I presume?! |
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05/01/2003 09:57:33 AM |
| very nice clarity and color i really like the light reflecting off of the car nice job |
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04/30/2003 08:41:30 AM |
| nice crisp photo and great license plate |
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04/30/2003 04:31:57 AM |
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