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06/27/2005 12:11:20 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
To be honest, this image does not represent darkness to me. The fact that the sky is still somewhat blue and that there is a light shining on the left side of the frame is not helping. Perhaps it would have worked better if you had cropped the light out. The colors are nice but I don't really think it meets the challenge very well. Maybe next time you should try filling the frame a bit more with your subject. If you have any questions or comments about this critique please feel free to PM me.
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06/21/2005 11:04:38 AM |
Very nice colours.
Good composition too. |
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06/21/2005 10:53:17 AM |
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06/19/2005 06:02:48 PM |
Sorry for the form-letter type commentary. I̢۪m going to try to give almost everyone at least this breakdown to start. I would be happy to offer a more detailed opinion if you would like, though I don̢۪t consider myself a very knowledgeable photographer.
Here is how I broke down my score for your submission.
Content: 2/4 (Is the subject compelling? Does the choice of content match the challenge?)
Composition: 1/2 (Is the work well balanced and successful?)
Color/Light: 2/2 (Is light and or color used with skill and artistic intent?)
Clarity: 0/2 (Is the picture in focus? Are the elements clear?)
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06/19/2005 07:01:12 AM |
| pity about flare on the light but a well put together shot. clear good perspective |
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06/18/2005 09:51:29 AM |
| Maybe a little closer would have been better? |
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06/17/2005 06:29:02 PM |
| The best way to have a guys night out. A Fridge, shed, large back yard and some hops. |
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06/17/2005 01:14:54 PM |
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06/17/2005 11:11:22 AM |
| This kinda looks like you were spying on your neighbours - could you have gotten a little closer so we could see what they were up to? |
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06/17/2005 06:47:50 AM |
| Color is the striking feature of this image. Nice RGB (Red, green, blue). Blacks are decent. Obviously darkness means an evening conversation likely triggered by events of the day to you. That might seems obscure to some voters and they will be wondering what the conversation is about. The setting was most important to you when taking the picture but a lot of viewers would like to see the peopple closer and see the expressions on their faces and better understand what they are doing there. The wire across the sky is a distraction. The amount of lawn in the foreground may be more than needed. Image quality is decent. |
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06/16/2005 04:43:21 PM |
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06/16/2005 07:24:08 AM |
| Something a bit 'Edward Hopper' about this. Intriguing. Love the extra saturation. |
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06/15/2005 09:23:33 PM |
| Great photo - must be a good camera (and a good photographer!) The light, color and quality is so good, that I find it hard to associate the photo with "darkness". Good luck with the voting. |
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06/15/2005 01:40:27 PM |
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