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04/30/2003 01:15:50 PM |
Critique Club
Initial thoughts
Great colour Γ’ love the combination of black and yellow. Composition seems random.
Composition/ Content
I like the way that some of the content is in the light and some is in shadow. I am struggling to find a point of focus Γ’ a hook into this picture. I do like that there is some negative space at the top of the frame.
Background
A good rich black Γ’ I think that helps make the yellow seem more vibrant.
Camera Work - Technical
It seems that detail/ texture is missing from the fronds under bright light Γ’ though itΓ’s hard to tell what detail they actually have.
Fits The Challenge
Yes
My Opinion On The Photo
Great colours, but for me this lacks a focal point and hook.
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04/27/2003 07:25:21 PM |
| Nice... I like the way the yellow forms glow out of the black background. Good work. |
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04/25/2003 10:27:09 AM |
| Very interesting shot, I like your colors |
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04/24/2003 04:01:44 AM |
| interesting shot... the color stands out nicely here... good work :) - setzler |
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04/23/2003 02:17:44 AM |
| Nice artistic setup. I wish the light was a little more balanced and the plant in front was more in focus. |
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04/22/2003 07:11:29 PM |
| Great shot! Methinks this looks familiar, too. Excellent capture, I love the way the yellow stands out against the black background! |
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04/22/2003 07:24:17 AM |
| How inventive of you!!!!!!!!!!!! Great thinking. |
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04/22/2003 01:08:34 AM |
| Now this is a different view of flora! Good idea and well shot. The lighting is ideal here - 8. |
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04/21/2003 02:48:17 PM |
Hey - rockweed!!!! Are you really underwater, or is this an aquarium???
Glad to see something different in this challenge - you get bonus points for creativity. Very nice lighting. |
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04/21/2003 07:23:50 AM |
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04/21/2003 03:15:39 AM |
| Unique and engaging lighting here. |
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