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04/23/2003 10:01:06 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - This is not a very compelling image. The point of the photo is simple enough, but it doesn't say much else to me. It doesn't really have a lot going for it. There needs to be something more to this, like some kind of subject, but for the life of me I can't think of what. I guess I don't have a lot to say about this. I think an overhaul of the whole composition is about the only answer I have to solve the problems with this photo. Give the viewers something to focus on and keep their attention.
Technical - This is fairly well taken. Snow shots are tough, especially when that's pretty much what you were going for. It seems a trite washed out nearest the grass. Sacrificing some exposure time though may darken the greens in the grass a little more than you want though. Tough call...
Overall - This meets the challenge, but aside from that there isn't too much I can tell you or suggest. I think a nice clean spring slate would be the best place to start. The snow is finally gone around here, for now. Hope spring brings you lots of nice pics. Good luck in future challenges. - Inspzil |
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04/15/2003 02:53:15 AM |
| Ah what a contrast, spring on the left and winter on the right. Good idea! |
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04/14/2003 10:17:14 AM |
| I like the texture of this photo. |
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04/13/2003 10:28:54 PM |
| Weather perhaps, although there's not really much in this photo to hold my attention. |
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