*Critique Club*
I think this is a neat image. I like the simplicity of it. The lighting on the book is neat. I can read the words "Learning to Light" However, can't read the othe words, which I am assuming is the author? I wish I could see them better, although I think that's just because they are smaller than the title.
I like the green color of the book.
The flame is a bit blown out, just a little too bright. Also I see some pixelation in the orange part of the flame. Not sure what caused that, or how to fix it. Actually, not even sure it shows up for anyone but me since no one else commented on it, but I do see it, and it does look a bit odd.
The dark area on the candle is a distraction since it blends in with the background so well. I would like to have seen the candle turned to a side where you couldn't see, or could barely see that black area.
The border is nice. Not overpowering. Curious as to why you picked the tan color as it doesn't appear to be in the photo. It does work though. As I said, it's not too strong and doesn't distract from the image at all.
This is a neat image for the challenge. It doesn't have a huge visual appeal, nothing to really make it jump out at me and make me stare at it for a long time, but it is technically well done and interesting.
~Heather~ |
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