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04/26/2003 11:22:51 AM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
COMPOSITION
I think the composition of this shot is very well balanced. The eyes are drawn to the bottom left then pulled up the prop to the upper right. I obviously don't know what the background contained, or what your mobility issues may have been, but I think it would have been neat if you could have been "up" more and more on the horizontal with the plane. Or, if you could have gotten some good motion blur of the prop (not that I would want to be taken the picture when the plane started, but it may have added a touch of interest to the composition.
TECHNIQUE
The focus is awesome -- I can read the red sticker. Also, even though you have shadowed areas, the exposure is neither too harsh, or too dull. Very nicely done. You have captured details without blowing anything out.
OVERALL EFFECT
You have captured weather well, though possibly indirectly (which is fine by me!). The blue sky provides a nice backdrop, and the shadows hints at the sun. I suspect the subject of the shot may not have grabbed some viewers as immediately as it would others. This would be a great print for an aviation buff or pilot, or would look good hanging in a hangar, etc. For the general public, though, it may not do much. But still, it is an awesome shot.
Best to you in future challenges.
karmat |
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04/20/2003 04:01:01 PM |
| Nice approach to the challenge... makes me want to go cut some holes in the sky myself! :) Composition, perspective, and angle of the prop work well to create an interesting shot. Exposure is perfect; even on the brightest portion of the spinner. Nice shot! |
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04/17/2003 07:48:17 PM |
| Good job conveying good weather without the typical sunset or sirrus clouds. |
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04/17/2003 01:39:59 PM |
| great angle on the nose of the plane, but the crop cut out the right propeller blade! :( |
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04/16/2003 04:14:02 PM |
| nice idea displays weather very well |
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04/16/2003 04:15:30 AM |
| Choice composition, I love the way you've cropped it! Very in focus too, well done. |
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04/15/2003 05:40:36 AM |
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04/14/2003 10:28:07 PM |
| Good take on the challenge. This picture is clean and well focused. The lighting is perfect and the colors are vivid. |
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04/14/2003 07:37:36 PM |
| Fun image with some great colors. Tack sharp focus and a great story of a trip to come. |
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04/14/2003 10:51:12 AM |
| Nice color, nice composition and focus. |
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04/14/2003 10:13:12 AM |
| I like the lighting in this photo. |
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04/14/2003 08:54:32 AM |
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04/14/2003 07:57:41 AM |
| Nice sharp image with a good composition. |
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