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05/22/2005 09:09:25 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
This is the second of your photographs that I have been presented for critique. This is a very interesting photograph, very old fashioned and full of minor details that tell an intereting story. It makes me wish I could see a little more of the surroundings, to get a little more of the story.
I really like the use of sepia in this photo, it adds to the feel of age, and the allure of mystery. The use of leading lines is good too, althought they tend to lead to eye to the window of the trailer behind rather than into the interior of the subject trailer. Leading lines are very powerful, they can fool the eye into traveling in the wrong direction if you are not careful.
To me this is a better photograph the longer I look at it. Sometimes the little details that are not evident in a 5 second glance are the details that make the photograph "speak" to the viewer. My mind is making up all sorts of stories about running away to join the circus and living in a tiny little trailer. Thank you for sharing this moment in time with me. Good luck on future challenges.
Barbara
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05/11/2005 01:53:36 PM |
| Interesting. Looks like a travel trailer bone yard. |
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05/09/2005 09:05:14 AM |
| The light was rather insufficient on interior of right hand wreckange. A 4. |
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