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04/15/2003 10:42:46 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - I don't know if the aspect ratio of a photo qualifies as part of the composition, but I don't like these extra long aspect ratios. It just doesn't work for me. The redness of the tape measure is pretty muted and just looks a little red. I think with this title, the tape would have to be really red to be effective. This looks a lot like a plain old tape measure to me. I think a more stunning color would yield a more visually impacting photo.
Technical - Nothing wrong with the way this was taken. I would suggest a little less light but that's just me. The focus and DOF is good. THe framing, for this type of photo works.
Overall - Not a badly taken photo but it could've used a little more pizzazz and even some more color. I think the composition is the main problem with this photo as it is lacking visual impact. i.e. its not terribly interesting. Good luck with your future photos and challenges - Inspzil |
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04/12/2003 08:30:40 PM |
| yes white is all colors together, but is really more neutral than anything.. so for me color is not the dominant subject of the photo |
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04/12/2003 08:19:16 AM |
| One of the more imaginative shots that I've seen. |
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04/11/2003 02:45:14 PM |
| Not the most colourful subject for a colour challenge but it is still colour i surpose. The title saves it a bit with the double meaning. Different. 7 |
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04/11/2003 09:32:56 AM |
| Interesting display of that phrase. |
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04/10/2003 08:16:35 PM |
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04/09/2003 05:40:04 AM |
| Red on white is always a good bet, and you have done it well. |
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04/08/2003 10:23:59 AM |
| nice job nice use of color |
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04/08/2003 09:42:28 AM |
| Excellent crop! I love these more panoramic views! Nice use of simple bright colors. |
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04/08/2003 06:32:53 AM |
| Lovely composition and the gradient minty green background adds to the effect. Very nice. |
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04/07/2003 04:06:12 PM |
| Looks like white tape, but a good photo neverless |
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